Diabolik Lovers: The Humble Heroine’s Online Comeback

This article feels like the author's wife's writing skills are good, and there is no obvious OOC, but there are also shortcomings. Maybe the context of the article is a bit messy, maybe there is no outline? So since time travel back in time, there has been a bit of a separation in the guide and repair... How to put it, firstly, it is impossible for Kanato to be so accommodating to the heroine. It is completely impossible to choose Kanato and be so involved with other characters. Kanato is crazy, but he also has his own persistence and pride. The second is that the monk helped the heroine because of an old incident, but in fact the two did not get along with each other particularly deeply. The added scenes later were a bit redundant and affected the quality of the plot. At the beginning, the article said that Xiu and the heroine were in a relationship other than friendship and love, but later it was written as a relationship between a man and a woman... It's a pity. If there was an outline, maybe the quality of the article could be higher. Of course, although it has flaws, I was quite happy to read it, which shows my wife's skills and talents.

I wanted to have a follow-up, but I stopped writing. I'm so sad.

I really like it... Not to mention that the characters of these brothers are not easy to control and it is easy to write down. I would like to say that the portrayal of the heroine is so good that I fell to my knees orz... The author has done a good job with the character and the author has played the game several times.) I love it very much.

Oh my gosh, I loved it so much. I stopped when it was dawn and ended with flowers. Thank you to the author for bringing us such a great work! O(≧v≦)o

My wife wrote very well! ! ! ! Looking at it 25 years ago, there is no sense of fragmentation of the era at all [Love Eyes] The writing is very delicate! Good looking! I feel like there should be a side story d [poor] at the end. Good luck~

It's so hard to figure out the character of the character in the reverse scroll, but he was able to bring out the character's personality so vividly and design such a palatable heroine. I'm amazed orz

I stayed up late to finish reading it... I really liked it, can I ask for a sequel?

I re-read this novel again. I still remember that I was in junior high school when I read it. Now I have graduated from high school. When I read it again, I still feel that the author's writing style is still OK. I liked watching this anime more at first, and then I always wanted to find his fanfiction. Then I saw this novel. I was very moved. Well, thank you to the author for giving us this story.

Will there be any extras or follow-up?

This is the best magical love fanfic I have ever read? Thank you, the author, for creating such a touching story???