A glance back five years ago
A chance encounter today
A surge beneath a calm, tranquil surface
You and I are still the same
I wrote this when I was young and immature, five years ago, before I was an adult. Reading it now makes me want to cover my face. Did I really write this?! It has such a strong Mary Sue vibe. I don't know if I can salvage it by making a few quick edits now, but the whole thing is probably still going to be self-indulgent. I need a little embarrassing writing from my past to show just how bad I used to be.
Let's poke fun at how much of a Mary Sue the heroine is.
The heroine is a local. A local, a local!
P.S. Kunimitsu Tezuka has been A Qin's idol for nearly seven years. I can't imagine how furious A Qin would be if Takeshi Konomi gave him a girlfriend. /(ㄒoㄒ)/~~
The New Prince of Tennis is out now, too!!! I'm wondering whether I should write something...
The overall feel of the story is cozy. It's not a comedy, not a conspiracy story, and not a cool, aloof romance. It's just a gentle, cozy story about being with Kunimitsu, and a chance for A Qin to indulge in some romance too. The heroine isn't irresistible to everyone, and she isn't impossibly beautiful.
Theme:
After reading the introduction, I knew it was Su Wen. I thought I had to keep reading it for the sake of Buchou, but I really couldn't hold on. Su was secondary, and the main reason was that I really didn't like Yukimura. So when I read Buchou's articles, I usually picked people who had nothing to do with Rikkai Dai. I originally thought it was just ordinary Su, but when he got involved with Rikkai Dai, I really had no choice but to quit.
After reading the introduction, I knew it was Su Wen. I thought I had to keep reading it for the sake of Buchou, but I really couldn't hold on. Su was secondary, and the main reason was that I really didn't like Yukimura. So when I read Buchou's articles, I usually picked people who had nothing to do with Rikkai Dai. I originally thought it was just ordinary Su, but when he got involved with Rikkai Dai, I really had no choice but to quit.
I'm so intoxicated, what a fucking joke