I still remember the first time I saw you, how my heart skipped a beat. The next time I saw you, my country had fallen and my family was gone. Perhaps you never remembered me, just as I never forgot you. After enduring every kind of torment, all I could do was bury these feelings deep beneath the sea. But fate loves to toy with people, and now our parallel lines are beginning to cross again...
Come on, author! ↖(^ω^)↗
An old man gradually collapsed...???
I suggest the author change the title to something cute, concise and clear, I really mean it. ?
The author can leave a blank line between paragraphs. This looks more comfortable, the author should cheer up and spread the flowers.