Beyond the Abyss [Mermaid]

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I have been reading articles in Jinjiang Literature City, and I am used to Chinese literature. Today I accidentally saw this article "Beyond the Abyss". The unique writing style and narrative method, as well as the handling of characters and character relationships... All made me feel fresh and new. No, I have only read more than a dozen chapters, so I can't wait to write this review, hoping to have some communication with the author... Haha! Without further ado, let me tell you my own opinion! Among them, the description of the special relationship between the two protagonists, their love and death, and some exaggerated religious colors, etc., All fascinated me. Especially the characters of Qin Tuo and the mermaid are very special. Qin Tuo is indifferent, as if he has no interest in everything. However, he only has a deep-rooted obsession with mermaids. This obvious contrast in personality makes me curious about his past all the time and exploring the description and development of the character. What must be said is that such a description really attracted me! There is also the description of the mermaid. From beginning to end, the mermaid does not speak much. To be precise, it can be described as silent, but this silent character is extremely full and the flavor of Western literature is extremely rich! Even when he is curled up in a glass box, he is so charming. I think he is very good at using words, "A cluster of blue trembled violently, accompanied by the sound of water, and a strong body emerged from the water, revealing fair skin and long black hair. The mermaid in the water stared at Qin Tuo quietly, watching Qin Tuo approach step by step."... There are many descriptions like this, with a strong sense of picture and very provocative! Under the rendering of these words, I can see the words as a scene, not bad! As I said just now, this article makes me feel that it has strong characteristics of Western literature. It is different from the ancient sayings that I liked to read before. This makes me feel very novel and like it very much. For example, in the language form, it has a lot of imagery and metaphors of Western modernist literary representation to imply people's feelings, impressions and mental states. The metaphors are very rich, but they do not make people feel cumbersome. I like this very much, as in, "The huge fish's tail was slightly curled up, and the tip of its tail was carefully poking at the hole, which made the person changing the water slow down again, making the water flow slower. Everyone was attracted by the scene in front of them, and the crystal blue from their waists The colorful fish scales gradually go down until the fish scales turn into ink black, and every inch is so charming." (Okay, there are too many sentences that I like, so I won't give examples one by one. In short, it is still the same sentence, and the writing style of the big expression, I like it very much!) In shaping the character image, I feel that through my own words, I have created very distinct personalities of Qin Tuo and Mermaid. One is very quiet, but gives people a sense of insight into everything, while Mermaid has a very gorgeous image, and her domineering and irritable personality is just in contrast to Qin Tuo, and Qin Tuo's self-dedication aroused my endless associations. Of course, although the two protagonists are often written about in the article, they are always alluding to society, thereby showing the comprehensive alienation of people, showing the comprehensive alienation of people and society, people and matter, people and nature, people and others, and people and themselves. This is very good. When I see the Binxi people's almost religious worship of mermaids, I naturally think that mermaids are not ferocious. However, the description of the relationship between Qin Tuo and mermaids in the previous story, as well as the speculation and description of the shipwreck, made me feel the instinct of mermaids' vicious nature. Therefore, I am very curious, what kind of mermaid character is the character that Da Da is trying to exaggerate? These many doubts kept me reading. Yes, this is much more interesting than the sweet stories I had read before that had no suspense or conflicts. However, I looked at the traffic volume and it seems that it is not very ideal. This may be related to Jinjiang's preferred writing style. Jinjiang's good traffic is all sweet love stories with endings like this. It is normal for very clear non-HE abuse stories to be unpopular. However, for those of me who like plots, I still like them very much. Thank you for contributing this article to us. It is refreshing for me. I think I will have to work hard to find this kind of Western style article in the future, because I have fallen in love with you. What can I do... Haha! I just came back from the show and am a little tired, so I'll write this first! (Actually, I can't wait to continue reading. If you have any ideas, please wait until you finish reading before continuing to write.) The last sentence, I like the article very much, I love you so much!

QAQ Loulou, will Mermaid and Qin Tuo have a happy ending?

It's so beautiful, why is there no one?

Tears streaming down my face (╥╥) I really like the young master!