
A Disciple's Love
舐徒之爱
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 60k Words
- Genre
- Baihe (GL)
- Era
- Ancient Era
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
22Chapters
272Favorites
8.5Score
2Nutrient gifts
1.6kClicks per chapter
32Comments
In booklists 1
Reader comments 27
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Oh my god, I read a fresh article in 2024. Although the men in it are annoying, the relationship between the two people is really delicate. Love and desire are intertwined. The boat passed away from then on, and the rivers and seas left the rest of my life. The future is bright.
No, no, no, this article is superbly written (the only drawback is that it is a bit short. I think the writing is very good, and the writing alone surpasses most of the current writings (nowadays, almost every time I read the writing, I am shocked, but there are still many people blindly bragging, and I really don't understand. Do you know how surprised I am when I read this article while searching for articles in the middle of the night??!!! From the introduction, you can see that the writing is already very good. After reading the first chapter, I thought: Damn hot daddy! It's super delicious! Look at this description! Look at this dialogue! It's not awkward at all, it's not a noob, and it's not a funny and nonsensical line. (The macho man sheds tears) Really, I feel so happy when I see a piece of writing that can be read. This is a complete treasure! ! ! ! Why are there so few people? I'm not convinced. It's obviously very good-looking. And the plot is also very smooth and looks very enjoyable. The plot is well-executed, bloody but not vulgar. (I don't know why. Now that I'm reading the article, it tastes so tacky. I actually shed tears.) It's so bloody for a good reason, with foreshadowing and hints. (The last time I saw a story, it was really bloody. The plot took off like a rocket, and suddenly I fell in love, hated it, broke up, and got together again. It was so baffling. Me: ??? [Black question mark]). Emotional development is smooth and not awkward. (Really, not being embarrassed is already a high requirement. Some CPs are better off together than apart. I beg them to separate. 8. Don't ruin the word love) Unfortunately, maybe because of the short length, the plot and emotions started a little too fast. There's a lot more that could be filled with rich content, ah, it's really sad. The coincidences in the article are too coincidental, and if it were longer, it would be less compelling. The struggle in the sect and the calculations between people have also been simplified a lot, and it doesn't look very exciting (so you really don't want to consider a sequel? (It's really too short and not enjoyable to watch) (I know there is no such thing)) (Pi is very happy this time. In fact, I am super cute in the orthopedics series, but writing this type of article is very labor-intensive. It's embarrassing and disgusting if it's not written well. There are very few people who write this kind of thing, and even less people write well (crying faintly). I'm so happy to read this article, it's very delicious. (Crazy praise for the two authors) It's really great to read this article. It's great that the author can write such a good article. It's great that the author can persevere. I want to blow you up to the sky! ! ! ! (Thanks to the author who was in the second grade of middle school for his imagination. (If I were in the second grade of middle school, emmmmm... I would only want to destroy the corpse and wipe out the traces and kill the mouth.
This lock feels like the essence has been locked up, I can only imagine by myself,,,
Compared to mother and daughter, I am more concerned about the dirty things done by Lei Zhongqing and Shangxian.
I really like DaDa's writing style, keep up the good work DaDa (* ̄3 ̄)╭?? The little flowers will hit you
The wide imagination and the writing style of relatives and friends are very good. Although I don't know why there are so few comments... But personally I like this style of writing (send it to me). One more thing: the straight man (woman) upstairs has a cancerous look. I hope it will not affect the mood of the author and his friends in writing and posting articles.
Do you have the manuscript saved? I only have one comment after writing so much. I don't believe it. Did you post many chapters in one day?
Let me go, does the author still use Jinjiang? I stumbled upon a very good one, and found out it was from many years ago.
It looks good, but how do you read the lock seal?
Is there no chance to see the lock seal...