--- Fog Town, a strange town shrouded in mist all year round, has only one high school.
Alan is a newly arrived teacher. Every so often, flashes of inspiration come to him: a student hanging from a tree, or a teacher falling from a building.
A few days later, it really happens.
The day after a suicide, Alan is unexpectedly stabbed while walking at night, and rescued by a man who happens to pass by. From then on, the handsome young man, who is always grinning, clings to him. He even shamelessly moves into Alan's staff residence!?
As the days pass, Alan begins to notice the young man's strange behavior. Could those eerie premonitions and unusual deaths really not be suicides, but deliberate murders by a serial killer?
And just who is Brandon, whose origins are unknown? What does all this have to do with Alan?
Every unsolved mystery seems to be wrapped in the thick fog covering Fog Town.
● Thanks to Qingmingqing for the cover art!
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Announcement, 2019-08-21:
In accordance with the campaign to clean up the internet, parts of Chapters 18, 20, and 26 have been adjusted, and the story is under review again. The revised version is sure to read less smoothly, but... just bear with it, okay? QwQ Please wait patiently, dear readers, until it passes review and is unlocked~~
Premise:
I came across this article by chance after eight years, and clicked in out of curiosity. I actually don't really read the horror genre, but I was completely attracted to it. I'm very grateful to meet you on this day with such a story and the author behind it. It's fate. I couldn't stop until I saw the end of this chapter. It only took a few hours. During this period, I kept recommending it to my friends. I said go and read it, please! They also told me that they looked very good and they all liked it. The first reaction when I opened it was that the writing is very powerful, the descriptions are detailed, and the experience is immersive. It will make people unconsciously slow down the reading speed and take a closer look. The rhythm of the subsequent gradually getting more and more tense is also well grasped. I like it very much and it is very comfortable to read. It does not look like a work in 2018 at all. The character creation is very full and three-dimensional. Allen's multiple personalities directly point to him as an existence that is neither good nor evil, but at the same time there is no way to objectively separate it, which leads to the ending of be. I can't understand it more, but it is still too sad... Including Brandon's early and late stages. He went to rescue himself through Allen but had to face Allen's evidence. Witnessing his death in front of him was too tragic, but it is a must-have part of the tragedy. Generally speaking, this kind of plot is easy to cause criticism if the writing is not strong enough, but it is so well written, including the logic and foreshadowing in all aspects, and it has a feeling that is unexpected and unexpected. So it is sad but it makes me feel more relieved than crying. There is a feeling that although I know it will be so miserable, I am still sad to see it. It is very powerful and rare, because the tragedy of sadism is very simple, but it is difficult to achieve a self-consistent sense of belonging. I think this is something that many works cannot do. Including teacher, I have also read your answers to other comments many years ago. I feel so happy to be able to catch up with some of the same ideas! The plot is also great, each case is unconventional, and the secrets of the entire mysterious seemingly everyday town residents are revealed one by one, each with its own dark side and bright side. Ah ah, I want to mention Simon in particular. From the very beginning, I felt that something was wrong with him, and my mental journey has always been like this: There is something wrong with you - why are you like this - it makes you so bad? ——Worse than I thought! The writing is so charismatic... I really like the name given to Alan's little teddy, it is exactly like a little angel baby. It would be great if I could touch his head [touch head] [touch head] I kept crying when I saw him drinking a bullet and committing suicide... The only regret is that it is very short and I didn't read enough about the daily life of Allen and Brandon in the parallel world. At this point, I can only scream that they are a perfect match! When I read the last chapter, a song happened to play, it was Alis Shuka's Not About Us, and I wanted to cry so much. From then on, Brandon couldn't forget Allen's eyes, that night and that kiss, just live like that🥲🥲🥲There are still many emotions that cannot be expressed, so I will write them here first. I am very grateful to the teacher for bringing me a work that touched me very much. I hope I can still convey it to you after so many years! I really want to see new works again, looking forward to it🫶🫶🫶
Oh my God, this is actually a be. He suffered 100,000 points of damage... It's so painful that he'll die. That dead police officer should be in pain for the rest of his life and never be able to escape.
I've finally finished reading. The ending? From the first chapter, the very right language style attracted me all of a sudden. The teacher's description of the scenes was too strong. Scenery such as the quiet courtyard with roses in full bloom really appeared in my mind as I read it. The picture is full [Rose] [Bi Xin] About the relationship and ending of the two people, well... Although it is a bit painful to watch, it is indeed logical, so bear with it and accept the ending. T^T The teacher's writing is very strong.,, (),,, [][]…——
Can I see the omitted text?
Does this town really have anything to do with Allen?
From the beginning of this article, I didn't feel that I could read it, at best it was ne. The emotional line... It can be roughly summarized that the originally decadent police officer accidentally met the gentle teacher and pulled himself out of the decadence. Then he left the cohabitation life because of the case, then accidentally drank and had sex, and finally died before actually talking to the teacher. I always feel like something is missing. Is the pace too fast? As for the person who died in the end, emmmmm, his personality is really strong.
Looks like sleepwalking...?
I don't quite understand the joke about marking eleven. The rumor's sentence reminds me of another similar sentence, "The best way to get over a broken relationship is to start a new relationship."
Quite a fan, and the pockets are deep enough? What's the deal with potions?
It's really well written! Very realistic!! No one is completely bad or completely good...