[D.I.E.] Serving the Lord Is Like Serving a Tiger

Maybe my focus is wrong. I didn't see Yuan Lang dispelling his doubts about Mingyu at the end. Was it a bad ending?

? The good guy stopped abruptly, and to be honest, he looked confused. If it was set up like this, it would be better for the heroine to not quit Old A, and then defeat Gao Cheng and the others in the exercise. Gao Cheng looked awkward but was a little curious about the few girls in Old A. The guy from Old A watched the heroine being forced to go on a blind date. Although they were already friends, he still joined in the fun and wanted to match the female pumpkin in his garden and get her and Gao Cheng to know each other. Now the author writes like this, Xu Sanduo and the others did not come out of the main line of the soldier assault. The queen has become a member of the 7th Steel Company, and there is no scene where she meets the old A again on the training ground. Even the process of how the heroine established her authority in the 7th Steel Company after recovering from the injury is written in a hazy way. There is no plot about Gao Cheng being jealous after her blind date with Wu Zhe and Gao Cheng found out. It was indeed written suddenly and dizzy.

This injury looks really like Wang Bawen, whose talent was suddenly abolished. "Thirty years in Hedong, thirty years in Hexi, don't bully young people into poverty." Haha, and then after the heroine recovered from the injury, she was slapped in the face. But to be honest, the writing is a bit awkward. This injury setting. After careful reading, it is said that it may be difficult to aim a gun and perform tasks even after recovery. So it is possible for the heroine to shoot with her right hand, but if it is to fight, wouldn't someone target such an obvious weakness as the heroine's right hand injury? Just write that the heroine has some precognitive abilities and she can do everything? Weird.

The default estimate is that the other two captains left the chance of life and the relics to the heroine. It was very painful, so the heroine did not want to remember, explain, or be promoted. What's Yuan Lang's attitude? He didn't get along well with the heroine because of his personality, but he was able to join Team A because he was a comrade-in-arms. Yuan Lang believed that the heroine would not do anything wrong to the two captains, but he was more concerned about the contradictions in the relics and wanted to hear an explanation and know the real circumstances of their deaths. Later I found out that the heroine quit the team because of her illness and not because of a guilty conscience, so she had no choice but to let it go. It can only be said that if Yuan Lang really cares and suspects it, he will not hide this matter. As long as he reports it to the superiors, no matter what the heroine's thoughts and reasons are, he can only tell the truth. It can only be said that what Yuan Lang cares about is a relatively small point that does not affect the overall situation, but the author's writing is not good. I really don't like the suspicion and concern that the outside world has for the heroine. As a result, the author's writing of the two people's sacrifices and relics is just like the Riddler.

If you retired due to normal physical reasons, don't write such a plot that will make people mind. I am really speechless about the background of many derivative stories. For example, this time two captains of the first squadron died. Is it necessary to write it like this? But the author also wanted to make this mission very heroic, so that the heroine would completely give up the idea of ​​staying in Brigade A, and he also had to make it so that the heroine could no longer stay in Brigade A, but could still go to the division reconnaissance camp in Gaocheng. In fact, it's quite contradictory. Every time I watch this kind of beginning, I can only forget about them and read on. I just treat them as a tool to unfold the story.

It's beautiful, I like it very much, but it's too short! I really want to see more of the sweet daily life of the two of them

Well, the heroine is a character who sometimes has a slow mind and loses control of the film, but she also learned half of Yuan Lang's bad temper.

Like it very much! Ahhhhh

Haha, the hoe comes in randomly. . .

Already read, keep your claws hahahaha Come on! Come on! Come on! Come on!