Don’t Even Think About Winning Me Over

Emmmm, what can I say? The early part of the whole article is very well written, with scheming and scheming, and each attacker has his or her own characteristics. But I feel like it fell apart a bit from the beginning of the prison chapter. I can understand how the author wants to write it, but it feels like it's scratching an itch but not being able to scratch it. I think I was reading the synopsis for the later post-apocalyptic chapter... The interaction between Qin and Bai was very friendly, but in the end there was not much written about it until the ending. I was also looking forward to the extra story, but it turned out that it was very different from what I thought. The first extra story actually wanted to see the interaction between Bai Zui and the seven people. It turned out that it was written the same as galgame's promotional CV. Everyone said their "lines" once and then ended... The second extra chapter is not so much about the way Qin and Bai get along during the mission as it is about the ending of the sealed painting. After watching it, I felt like Qin was riding on three boats: Feng Ru Hua, Bai Zui, and the Demon Girl. This is the second book by the author that I have read. How should I put it? The advantages and disadvantages of the author's writing are obvious. The advantage is that the characters interact with each other well and are well written, scheming and competing with each other. Watching it gives you the joy of brainstorming. The shortcomings are also obvious. The characters are too one-sided and are completely trapped in the personality (the personality given by the author, not the one in the game). There is no development. The personal charm of the character is basically not shown, and there is too much preference for a certain character, which makes the article structure a bit weird. At the same time, the outline is very unstable. I am too eager to write a "series of articles" and some of the plots are not smooth. [I don't know if I was restricted by the two articles I wrote first and haven't come out yet. The author's positioning is very novel, and it can be said to be rare in JJ. If you think more about the reading points of the article, it should be popular. It makes people confused. At the same time, there are problems with the connection between the "series of articles": for example, characters such as Qinglang and Wen Qin appear very abruptly in each book, and there is a sense of being forced into them. [And towards the end of the writing, I felt like it was out of line, and it was completely two articles from the introduction. All I can say is: Come on, author

WC article from 5 years ago, I completely forgot when I read it

It's too miserable, it's too miserable. Make-up exams are the enemy of life.

It would be too miserable to take a make-up exam or something like that, right?

... What the hell is written here? I'm convinced. My four dollars were wasted.

This introduction looks good, check it out hey hey hey

My four dollars ah ah ah ah ah ah I hate you Jinjiang

To put it bluntly, I ordered the wrong novel when I was buying a book. What I wanted to buy was another one with the same name, Damn Damn Damn Jinjiang

Very good author I love you

It's a bit different from the introduction, but it's still pretty!