Reversing My Fate Through Quick Transmigration

I have read half of this article, and there are some problems. The length of each world is a bit short, which makes the emotional line very incoherent and makes people feel a bit abrupt. Gong Shou fell in love with her after just a few meetings, which caught people off guard. Also, the performance of the first world shou against a guy I haven't seen a few times was a little surprising. Moreover, the original male and female protagonists did not show any decent strength. They were simply tools for attacking and receiving slaps in the face, and were too easily defeated by the protagonist. This is also the main reason for the short length of the article. The character has no connotation and the image is not full enough. This is not only reflected in the supporting characters, but also in the protagonist. The author can add more details to make the characters more vivid and vivid. The author's writing style also needs to be improved. Of course, I didn't read the last part of the article, so the evaluation is somewhat inaccurate. Moreover, this is also my first time to write a long review, and the suggestions are not good. As a digression, is the author really cheating? No, the setting of the article is really cute! ! ! ! !

Damn, is this a scam? Did you agree that it wouldn't be a scam?

Author, are you being fooled?Don't want it_(:з∠)_

Why Jiang Zi! ! ! Why do you want to cheat at this time! ! ! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh, author, you are so annoying!

Is this a trap? {(-_-)}

Please give me an update! ! !

QVQ is stuck here and abandoned. This is too much.

Please update

The wood is gone... Come back now, it's autumn, wait for the harvest...

Damn, when will you update?