The Empress's Tale: A Song for Zixi was written to fulfill a dream. She is Chen Ajiao, the woman kept in a golden house in history, the Empress Chen of the Rhapsody of Changmen. Her birth and death dates are unknown, and history has almost nothing to say about her. She exists, at most, in folk tales. I want to give her a fairly perfect love, so that even if her marriage fails while she is empress, she will have no regrets. And even if she eventually passes away, I hope she can look back on her life without regret.
Flowers fall and wither, while the flowers across the river still linger;
No object floats on the Weakwater, and nothing in this world lasts forever;
Beauty captivates the heart, and obsession follows into the next life;
When the River of Forgetfulness washes away foolish longing, where will the soul return?
Life is no more than a dream. How can it end in a death that tears us apart? If two people in love are not meant to end up together, then what is the point?
Scene One:
"Ajiao, tell me, what am I supposed to do with you? I don't want to force you, but I can't bear to let you go free, either! I can't bear to lose you, I can't bear to..." When I said nothing, he continued. If only we could let go of everything, there would be so many fewer troubles!
"This servant is slow-witted and does not understand Your Highness's meaning." I lowered my eyes and avoided his gaze, because I didn't know what I meant, either!
"Ajiao, I want to take your heart out and place it inside my own. Then your heart would always be with me!"
"Your Highness, this servant's heart is made of glass and breaks easily! If you put it in your heart, it will surely hurt you. And without a heart, I would lose all attachment to this world!" I looked up at him and said with a faint smile.
Theme: Break free from the twin shackles of imperial power and love, and undo the tragedy of the golden house that has endured for millennia. Rebuild Chen Ajiao's life with the soul of a modern woman, find a way to live as herself beneath the constraints of imperial rule, and redefine true independence and redemption by rewriting a sorrowful fate she never chose.
Come on! It must be finished
More updates? It's really well written
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If you are watching, you must keep working hard. You said you can't give up halfway!!
2 Points is an encouragement to novices. In terms of writing style, it is much better than many primary school students! But I hope that the following will not dampen your enthusiasm for writing. I will try to be gentle and talk about some issues. First: Well, when I read the copy, I thought it was to vindicate the aged Chen Ajiao, but it turns out that it is time travel. Time travel is not the real Queen Chen (this is just a small question, the author does not mind); second, the author has set the tone of the article is ancient style, and the writing style can also be seen and I want to rely on ancient poetry as much as possible. However. . . . . The ancient style of writing is filled with gorgeous rhetoric, mixed with embarrassing modern dialects, occasionally mixed with Qing and modern vernacular styles, occasionally used words indiscriminately, and has a little understanding of classical history. . . . . It's too pretentious and nondescript. The poem in the copy is really far-fetched. It's not just a collection of beautiful words that make it a poem. The key is the skillful use of meaningful words! I won't discuss plot logic or anything like that. After all, it's a new author. Of course, the author's writing style can still be seen to be well-founded. You can also tell that the author wants his writing to look beautiful and lofty, but he just chose the ancient poetry genre that requires very high writing skills from the beginning. If his writing skills are not enough, there will be many flaws. . . . I suggest you, the author, if you seriously want to write in an upright ancient style, gentle and gorgeous, you can read more poems similar to the "Huajian School" and "Graceful School", and more bold and bold poems. The most direct way is to read more works by Jin Yong, Gu Long and other great writers. Of course, I can only stand and talk without back pain. As a prostitute who majored in Chinese but has no courage to write, I really admire the author.
Gillian's article, work hard to finish it, it's already 100,000, I'll help you promote it in the post bar
Love doesn't know where it starts, but it goes deep; just follow the fate, follow the heart, what is the chance of meeting love? In my opinion, this heroine has undoubtedly met the so-called love. The heroine acts as she pleases and follows her heart. She dares to love and hate! Gaining and losing are no longer important!
Author, sometimes I feel that people have reincarnation, past lives, this life and the next!
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