A Precious Jade of the Shi Family in Dream of the Red Chamber

I feel that the protagonist is controlled by the author, which completely ruins the high IQ design!

First of all, I'm not here to find fault, I'm just here to share my thoughts on this article. How should I put it? I don't know why, but there is a sense of being told a story as an outsider in a straightforward way. I can't say exactly, it just feels very bland. I don't know if it's just me. And it contains too much of the author's own comments.

Why are all the Red Mansions fans I read recently like this? Really sad heart

As soon as I entered the pit, I learned that I might be abandoned (?_?)

Dear, have you traveled to the Red Mansion?

Has the author disappeared? If you want to abandon the pit, please let me know in advance. It's very uncomfortable to be stuck like this, OK →_→, speechless...

... This, and the previous chapter There is no need for the author to repeatedly trick us into subscribing, right?

Is it my imagination? _(:зゝ∠)_I have always had the feeling that the meaning of a paragraph is repeated over and over again, making the article seem a bit bloated and similar to watering down! I hope the author can improve it.

The part describing the lotus is really embarrassing, the primary school student's composition feels like déjà vu