An apocalyptic story, currently on the run.
Updates are irregular, probably once every half month. Top-focused story.
The apocalypse suddenly arrived in 2116. Before it, humanity had enjoyed a comfortable life with its technology. Afterward, most technology could no longer be used, though a small amount of new technology remained functional.
Humans with supernatural abilities and those who inherited ancient legacies work together to survive the apocalypse.
PS: Not a mutually exclusive relationship story.
The apocalypse setting is driven by the author's wild imagination. Anything might show up later on. I don't have an outline; I just write whatever comes to mind.
A newbie writer.
Come on, work hard, update.
Minced meat or something, it's poisonous@(￣-￣)@
The overall characterization is still very good. The author writes carefully. There will always be people who like it. Come on. !
The overall characterization is still very good. The author writes carefully. There will always be people who like it. Come on. !
The overall characterization is still very good. The author writes carefully. There will always be people who like it. Come on.
It's a bit confusing. Can you please switch from first person to third person?
Come on, come on, it feels like Shou seems to like that Bai Ningyang very much? I don't want to be sad, I hope to become a loyal dog Shou (≧ω≦)
Let me rant. If you look at the plot, you will know that the author is a newbie. The inner monologue and some excessive perspective are not rounded enough. It doesn't matter if you change the inner monologue to first person, but sometimes it looks stiff due to lack of writing power. It would be awkward for you to use the first person for some things that should be expressed in the third person. There are also some words and sentences that I think would be better if they were more colloquial and rough. For example, when the character named Qin talks about Yan Hao's family, he directly talks about their family. It seems a bit strange for you to highlight the family there. The words you use when you tell the protagonist to dream back to his past life are also very blunt, and the scene structure is scattered. In this plot, you can actually let the protagonist directly observe the whole process from a God's perspective and follow himself in the dream, so your jump news to explain the disaster that happened is very suitable. The protagonist deals with the plot after waking up from a dream. A disaster is about to come. The protagonist chooses a place to escape and also finds a place to work. I don't know if I didn't look carefully, but it makes sense. The author didn't tell the protagonist before asking him to find a job. In fact, the protagonist does not believe that a disaster is coming. He has to make preparations for his future life. Let's talk about the trio of Yan, Bai, and Qin. Speaking of the author, why don't you spoil the story and say it's a natural disaster? Why are there zombies intruding now? Director, if you behave like this, you will lose the protagonist. Speaking of the trio, they appeared too suddenly. Wasn't the protagonist fighting zombies before? Why did the two waves of people suddenly meet? The scene where the protagonist picks up Chairman Yan is too familiar. Little cute new author, if you write more, you will become a big star one day. (๑≧∀≦๑)
The author is great ~ come on (???_??)?
The end of the world is about to begin, please read the second half of the chapter