Blurb:
My girlfriend keeps changing from one person to another. I don't know if she's testing my feelings for her, and it's making me so anxious!
P.S. My next novel is Remarrying (Farming).
Blurb:
When Haitang opened her eyes, her new husband was breaking off their engagement. He even wanted back the betrothal gift he had given when he asked her to be his wife: a blue-mouthed mule.
Her father was furious, and her mother cried. They refused to return the mule no matter what, so it seemed the engagement could not be called off.
Haitang saw that her man was rather honest, so she stubbornly went back to his family home. This made him so angry that he barely spoke to her afterward.
But when her mother-in-law took fifteen taels and sold her as a concubine to the chieftain's son, he rushed over in a panic and snatched her back.
That night, he carried his bedding into her room.
Theme:
Hahaha, I like it. The plot setting of this article is quite novel.
I have read two books, and the male protagonist in each story is so pitiful ~(￣▽￣~)(~￣▽￣)~
Suddenly I want to know <(`^?)>, Is what you write a newspaper article? Hahahahaha
It's very interesting, especially the plot of the story, which is very novel. It's not like the kind of fast-traveling story about a person trying to survive, completing tasks, conquering targets, and getting slapped in the face. It's good-looking, eye-catching, and very relevant! Haha, not only the male protagonist is desperate, but the female protagonist is also desperate. Author, you are so bad, torturing them like this, haha
Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good! ! ! ! What a good emperor! ! !
Hahahaha, the heroine is so funny and the hero is so cute and cute
The two of them could still talk so much when the traffic police came.
Hahahahaha up to this point the male protagonist looks like a fool
The creativity is still good and there is a complete story, but I think the plot could be cut off by 1/3. Some of them are just too much nonsense.
My dear, I came back after a break. The rhythm is a little different from before. Maybe my ideas have been updated. I prefer the story logic before the break. Repeated plots and repeated scenes have different effects. It feels a bit like Rashomon. The multi-dimensional narration of this small scene feels very suitable for being made into a TV series. The story ended a bit hastily. I really hope you can maintain your ability to create small climaxes. Personal opinion, I hope you don't mind, I look forward to creating better works!
Hahaha, I like it. The plot setting of this article is quite novel.
I have read two books, and the male protagonist in each story is so pitiful ~(￣▽￣~)(~￣▽￣)~
Suddenly I want to know <(`^?)>, Is what you write a newspaper article? Hahahahaha
It's very interesting, especially the plot of the story, which is very novel. It's not like the kind of fast-traveling story about a person trying to survive, completing tasks, conquering targets, and getting slapped in the face. It's good-looking, eye-catching, and very relevant! Haha, not only the male protagonist is desperate, but the female protagonist is also desperate. Author, you are so bad, torturing them like this, haha
Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good! ! ! ! What a good emperor! ! !
Hahahaha, the heroine is so funny and the hero is so cute and cute
The two of them could still talk so much when the traffic police came.
Hahahahaha up to this point the male protagonist looks like a fool
The creativity is still good and there is a complete story, but I think the plot could be cut off by 1/3. Some of them are just too much nonsense.
My dear, I came back after a break. The rhythm is a little different from before. Maybe my ideas have been updated. I prefer the story logic before the break. Repeated plots and repeated scenes have different effects. It feels a bit like Rashomon. The multi-dimensional narration of this small scene feels very suitable for being made into a TV series. The story ended a bit hastily. I really hope you can maintain your ability to create small climaxes. Personal opinion, I hope you don't mind, I look forward to creating better works!