QwQ has seen too many bad people doing good things, and how hard it is for good people to do good things.
If the sky has no eyes, he will be the eyes of the sky. He had been so sure since he killed the first person. But if you kill evil people, you will still have trouble sleeping. Oh, God, I won't be able to sleep if I'm your eye, so I won't be your eye anymore and I'll quit, okay? .
It's really martial arts. I scanned half of the sites using the martial arts tag and I haven't met anyone who wants to get good reviews so much.
I finally understand why Feiniao said that his short stories are better than his long stories... Author's reply:
You can do whatever you want with a short story, do random things and innovate at will. Even if it is poorly written, it is still a short story. Once it is written, it is written. It's not a long story, you have to think about everything, the style of writing, the plot, the characters, no one will be happy after reading it.
Alas, philosophy, the writing is small but powerful. I admire it. Come on, I hope you can still write good things!! ~
In life, new things come and old things go. Hu San chose to do good at the end of his life and ended his life with a trace of kindness.
But alas...
What Chinese people love to say is that good and evil will be rewarded in the end, that retribution is unsatisfactory in the cycle of heaven, and that evil cannot prevail against good. Just like the old man in the article turned to Hu San, who he thought was a god, for help. In fact, he was desperate and in the deepest and darkest despair. He came up with such a way to comfort himself and make the most passive resistance.
There is never a law of good and evil.
Strong and weak, the same thing.
In martial arts stories, good defeats evil, and the strong defeats the weak, which is an inevitable formula.
But in this short article of more than a thousand words, the man-made balance was overturned, and everything returned to its primitive, simple, and indifferent original appearance, and all possible beautifications were discarded. In such an earthy world, a ridiculous and almost nonsensical "acting for heaven" story happened.
If Hu San was a hero, we could say that heroes age in their twilight years and strong men age in their twilight years... But he happened to be a killer who stood on the opposite side of justice and heroes. No matter how the thirty years of pure time and the fragrance of wintersweet had changed him, when he was in the snow and mud, with his hunched waist and hunched waist, dragging the horribly rusted frost plum blade to seek justice for a stranger, even he himself would not think that this was such a generous and tragic act of justice. He just wanted to have a good time and beg his mother.
When I saw this, I was thinking about what the ending would be like.
If Hu San killed the villain and returned to the mountain to continue planting his wintersweet, this story would be an out-and-out grassroots heroic legend.
If Hu San and the villain died together, this story would be a tragic end-of-life legend.
But in the end, Hu San failed to complete the feat of transforming from a killer to a hero. He didn't kill anyone, but he died in obscurity like an old madman. He couldn't even save the dignity of a killer, and couldn't even get the good death of an old flower farmer.
However, people who have read this story have truly regarded Hu San as a hero in their hearts. No matter whether he has completed the heroic feat of punishing rape and eradicating violence, it is no longer important. At the last moment of his life, he finally realized the same dream as every Jianghu person in his youth - to be a hero.
But, he no longer knows.
This article can be read in one breath. Needless to say, the writing skills are sophisticated. The author's ability to outline the characters that directly touch people's hearts in just a few thousand words is admirable. What is even more valuable is the compassion contained in the lines of the text. There is not a single word, but it is said with a cold and onlooker attitude, and its wisdom is lamentable.
As for the shortcomings, I personally think that this article is neat and plain. It should be a neutral and purely literary work. However, the too trivial inner description still has the usual procrastination of a woman's writing style, which weakens the strength of the whole article. If it can be more concise, it will be a wonderful article.
First rate, thank you for posting
Sure enough, reading short stories is easy, but this article is not easy.
In fact, people always say that if you withdraw from the world, there is no way to withdraw. After finally withdrawing physically, can the heart withdraw?
Whether it is in the bloody storm or in the house full of plum blossoms, life may just be for the ending you want...
Asuka, you are so talented~~^_____________^
Occasionally, I confessed my love to Nai... The author replied:
Me, I'm ashamed
I'm touched, you are so talented, and you write well.
Wonderful article, very well written. If I could see articles like this every day when I turn on my computer, my life would be complete. If all the jokes are written like this, what level would it be to write a serious one? :)
Shoot bricks below.
There are three characters in the article: Hu San, Guo Da, and ordinary villagers represented by the old man. Guo Da's character is relatively simple and has nothing to say.
Let's talk about Hu San first.
It can be said that Hu San was a "good" killer from the very beginning. He learned martial arts to save his brother, and became a killer to do justice for heaven. He only killed the people he wanted to kill, and he never "killed the wrong person." Even after killing evil people, he would not sleep well. All of this shows that he is a conscientious, righteous, and kind-hearted person. In the true sense, he is not a killer, but a hero, and a kind-hearted hero.
He lived an indifferent life on the mountain for thirty years, until one day, someone came to him to redress his grievances. His passion and pride suddenly revived, and he decided to pick up the knife again, and the original intention of killing this time was no different from any time thirty years ago. Therefore, this is not so much a satirical drama about "killers doing good deeds" as it is a tragedy in which a hero in his twilight years sacrifices himself for his ideals.
Let's talk about the old man and the ordinary villagers.
I have never quite understood the villagers' attitude towards the Hu San. Judging from the old man's lines, the villagers believed that Hu San was a god who lived in the mountains, so the old man came to beg him when he was desperate. Therefore, the villagers' attitude towards Hu San should be one of awe and reverence. But it can be seen from many details that this is not the case. For example:
He hasn't shaved or had a haircut in thirty years. When he occasionally goes to the village to buy some food, children will point at him.
Hu San asked one person after another, but no one was willing to answer him. Everyone looked at him like a monster. He is a monster who came down from the mountain. He doesn't understand the ways of the world, he only knows his flowers. Now he was asking some questions for an old brother, but no one was willing to tell him.
Including the last time the villagers went up the mountain to dig for treasures, how dare they just dig up things belonging to gods.
I can understand that the villagers think of him as mysterious, but it makes no sense to think of him as a god. After all, he had contacted the village chief when he first arrived in the village. Does the immortal need to buy land? Do you need to deal with these mortals? Do you need to "go to the village to buy some food"?
The above are some opinions on the plot of the article. It may be a bit confusing, so please laugh off the incomprehension. Author's reply:
Only those desperate people will believe what the gods say. And those ordinary and even ordinary poor people in the village would only treat him as a savage.
Maybe those villagers would still scare the children like this at night
There is a savage living on the mountain who comes out to eat babies at night
QwQ has seen too many bad people doing good things, and how hard it is for good people to do good things.
If the sky has no eyes, he will be the eyes of the sky. He had been so sure since he killed the first person. But if you kill evil people, you will still have trouble sleeping. Oh, God, I won't be able to sleep if I'm your eye, so I won't be your eye anymore and I'll quit, okay? . It's really martial arts. I scanned half of the sites using the martial arts tag and I haven't met anyone who wants to get good reviews so much.
I finally understand why Feiniao said that his short stories are better than his long stories... Author's reply: You can do whatever you want with a short story, do random things and innovate at will. Even if it is poorly written, it is still a short story. Once it is written, it is written. It's not a long story, you have to think about everything, the style of writing, the plot, the characters, no one will be happy after reading it.
Alas, philosophy, the writing is small but powerful. I admire it. Come on, I hope you can still write good things!! ~
In life, new things come and old things go. Hu San chose to do good at the end of his life and ended his life with a trace of kindness. But alas...
What Chinese people love to say is that good and evil will be rewarded in the end, that retribution is unsatisfactory in the cycle of heaven, and that evil cannot prevail against good. Just like the old man in the article turned to Hu San, who he thought was a god, for help. In fact, he was desperate and in the deepest and darkest despair. He came up with such a way to comfort himself and make the most passive resistance. There is never a law of good and evil. Strong and weak, the same thing. In martial arts stories, good defeats evil, and the strong defeats the weak, which is an inevitable formula. But in this short article of more than a thousand words, the man-made balance was overturned, and everything returned to its primitive, simple, and indifferent original appearance, and all possible beautifications were discarded. In such an earthy world, a ridiculous and almost nonsensical "acting for heaven" story happened. If Hu San was a hero, we could say that heroes age in their twilight years and strong men age in their twilight years... But he happened to be a killer who stood on the opposite side of justice and heroes. No matter how the thirty years of pure time and the fragrance of wintersweet had changed him, when he was in the snow and mud, with his hunched waist and hunched waist, dragging the horribly rusted frost plum blade to seek justice for a stranger, even he himself would not think that this was such a generous and tragic act of justice. He just wanted to have a good time and beg his mother. When I saw this, I was thinking about what the ending would be like. If Hu San killed the villain and returned to the mountain to continue planting his wintersweet, this story would be an out-and-out grassroots heroic legend. If Hu San and the villain died together, this story would be a tragic end-of-life legend. But in the end, Hu San failed to complete the feat of transforming from a killer to a hero. He didn't kill anyone, but he died in obscurity like an old madman. He couldn't even save the dignity of a killer, and couldn't even get the good death of an old flower farmer. However, people who have read this story have truly regarded Hu San as a hero in their hearts. No matter whether he has completed the heroic feat of punishing rape and eradicating violence, it is no longer important. At the last moment of his life, he finally realized the same dream as every Jianghu person in his youth - to be a hero. But, he no longer knows. This article can be read in one breath. Needless to say, the writing skills are sophisticated. The author's ability to outline the characters that directly touch people's hearts in just a few thousand words is admirable. What is even more valuable is the compassion contained in the lines of the text. There is not a single word, but it is said with a cold and onlooker attitude, and its wisdom is lamentable. As for the shortcomings, I personally think that this article is neat and plain. It should be a neutral and purely literary work. However, the too trivial inner description still has the usual procrastination of a woman's writing style, which weakens the strength of the whole article. If it can be more concise, it will be a wonderful article.
First rate, thank you for posting Sure enough, reading short stories is easy, but this article is not easy. In fact, people always say that if you withdraw from the world, there is no way to withdraw. After finally withdrawing physically, can the heart withdraw? Whether it is in the bloody storm or in the house full of plum blossoms, life may just be for the ending you want...
Asuka, you are so talented~~^_____________^ Occasionally, I confessed my love to Nai... The author replied: Me, I'm ashamed
I'm touched, you are so talented, and you write well.
Wonderful article, very well written. If I could see articles like this every day when I turn on my computer, my life would be complete. If all the jokes are written like this, what level would it be to write a serious one? :) Shoot bricks below. There are three characters in the article: Hu San, Guo Da, and ordinary villagers represented by the old man. Guo Da's character is relatively simple and has nothing to say. Let's talk about Hu San first. It can be said that Hu San was a "good" killer from the very beginning. He learned martial arts to save his brother, and became a killer to do justice for heaven. He only killed the people he wanted to kill, and he never "killed the wrong person." Even after killing evil people, he would not sleep well. All of this shows that he is a conscientious, righteous, and kind-hearted person. In the true sense, he is not a killer, but a hero, and a kind-hearted hero. He lived an indifferent life on the mountain for thirty years, until one day, someone came to him to redress his grievances. His passion and pride suddenly revived, and he decided to pick up the knife again, and the original intention of killing this time was no different from any time thirty years ago. Therefore, this is not so much a satirical drama about "killers doing good deeds" as it is a tragedy in which a hero in his twilight years sacrifices himself for his ideals. Let's talk about the old man and the ordinary villagers. I have never quite understood the villagers' attitude towards the Hu San. Judging from the old man's lines, the villagers believed that Hu San was a god who lived in the mountains, so the old man came to beg him when he was desperate. Therefore, the villagers' attitude towards Hu San should be one of awe and reverence. But it can be seen from many details that this is not the case. For example: He hasn't shaved or had a haircut in thirty years. When he occasionally goes to the village to buy some food, children will point at him. Hu San asked one person after another, but no one was willing to answer him. Everyone looked at him like a monster. He is a monster who came down from the mountain. He doesn't understand the ways of the world, he only knows his flowers. Now he was asking some questions for an old brother, but no one was willing to tell him. Including the last time the villagers went up the mountain to dig for treasures, how dare they just dig up things belonging to gods. I can understand that the villagers think of him as mysterious, but it makes no sense to think of him as a god. After all, he had contacted the village chief when he first arrived in the village. Does the immortal need to buy land? Do you need to deal with these mortals? Do you need to "go to the village to buy some food"? The above are some opinions on the plot of the article. It may be a bit confusing, so please laugh off the incomprehension. Author's reply: Only those desperate people will believe what the gods say. And those ordinary and even ordinary poor people in the village would only treat him as a savage. Maybe those villagers would still scare the children like this at night There is a savage living on the mountain who comes out to eat babies at night