The Hairdressing Maiden

I finally finished reading it in one go. I originally wanted to write more insights, but I saw a sister who wrote a very good long review before, so I won't go into details. Overall it's pretty good, with innovative themes and delicate descriptions. But as far as my personal feelings are concerned, there are less emotional scenes and the career line takes up the majority, making it a bit unsatisfying to watch. I hope the author will continue to work hard~

After not coming for many days, I found that it was actually over. I read it in one go. I won't comment on each chapter in the previous chapters. Congratulations on the completion. May you spread your flowers. To sum up, as a reader, my own feeling after reading this article may not be correct, but I hope it can be used as a reference and that I can better grasp the rhythm next time: After reading the full text, I felt a little top-heavy. That is, the front part is written very carefully, especially before the heroine enters Mrs. Yijia's house to study art. Almost every sentence, every psychological activity, and every subtle movement must be written down. But then, it suddenly accelerated, especially after Beijing. It felt a bit overspeed, as if I was reading the synopsis of the plot. If the previous rhythm is maintained, the following "outline articles" should be able to be extended to at least 500,000 words. Some readers reported that after moving to Beijing, development was very dull, which may be the reason. There isn't a very interesting conflict. Conflicts also need to be written in detail. The author doesn't like to write big villains, especially the female supporting characters, who are disgusting in front of the protagonist. Therefore, the supporting characters written by the author, especially the supporting characters of female characters, are very vivid and beautiful. Even the villains are not evil to the end, they are just ordinary ordinary people. I like this very much, but it doesn't mean that there can't be conflicts. Conflicts do not necessarily have to be malicious. Sometimes some details of getting along are not malicious, and there can also be conflicts. The heroine's original family members only appeared once. I thought they would at least be mentioned later. I don't believe that everyone in a family should abandon her. No family is truly unified. There must be some who don't know how to adapt to the old feudalism, some who are cunning and selfish, and some who maintain a simple heart. So back then, someone must have tried to find her to recognize her, but the people who wanted to keep her had no say or had their freedom restricted at the time, and they would not have the face to recognize her again after many years. Others did not dare to recognize her for the sake of family reputation or fear of the male protagonist's revenge. I thought I would at least mention this, but ended up not mentioning it at all, which was a bit disappointing. I hope the next one will be better.

Congratulations, take a holiday first

Is this ending too... Short? Never write BL, spread flowers

Well, the development after going to Beijing is indeed much duller, and the description of the hero and heroine before and after they get to know each other is also very dull. It didn't make me feel particularly sweet and sweet (although the tiger and the rabbit were the same). There is less of the feeling of "Ah, I am so nervous, I really want to read the next chapter" in the whole story. When watching Trouble, I really felt like I couldn't stop. The author needs to rest and adjust first, but if I write BL, I won't read it, so I'd like to say cheers first.

It's over like this, it's still pretty good-looking. After waiting for a long time, the princess didn't hold back her ultimate move. So unexpected.

The next chapter might be the finale.

Ah, sprinkle with sugar, it's so sweet to me

Two chapters at a time, awesome….

Getting married soon, getting married soon~