In the Palm of Your Hand

Complete. Perfect. It's just the final scene where the second uncle kidnapped me that could have been better written, but I always felt it was a bit jumpy. Also, at the beginning, Brother Kuiyu helped her sister carry bags for shopping. It felt a bit stiff at first. It felt okay at first, but later it was said that although the relationship between sister and brother has eased, it was still stiff. I felt that I didn't know how to do such a small thing, and it happened to be seen by Xinxin. And later I seemed to have forgotten the joke and passed without questioning. I didn't think it was okay at first. After all, I met my family for a long time and met them clearly. But at the end of several chapters, it is written that someone still cares about these things (that is, the nanny), and it feels like this should not be the case in the previous chapters. Grandpa also thought it was normal to object at first, saying that Xinxin was too pure and unsuitable to be Mrs. Zhan. Although she was the only granddaughter of a good friend, it was finally revealed that the friend's family was killed by his own son. It may be a father's normal reaction to protect his son, but he felt that it would be better to write the reason for grandfather's objection as fear that Xinxin would really become his grandson's daughter-in-law and find out the truth about the Tang family. Last but not least, I just finished watching "Yi Lu Qing Qing" yesterday. Didn't it talk about Su Shuang meeting Xia Han? Why does she seem to be a fan girl who has never seen her? Hanhan is on TV again, so I should know her identity. Also, I didn't read the article too carefully. Maybe I made a mistake in some of the above, so I'll give you extra points by adding more words! ! !

Spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers

Sister Su Shuang is really a woman who lives in other people's stories... She is finally looking forward to coming forward.

O(*////▽////*)q Finished spreading flowers, naturally dirty and powerful

When will I publish a new article~

Love you, congratulations on completing Big Fat Chapter, great job.

Haha, looking forward to the next one!

I'm so happy that it's over. I bought all the chapters when I heard it was over to support! ! ! Keep up the good work ??(???????)??

If you don't make a sound, that's all. If you make a blockbuster, that's my deep love for you.

Finished spreading flowers! Looking forward to the next one!