Born to be husband and wife, our love never to change. A forbidden romance so moving it shakes the heavens. Across three lifetimes, we miss each other again and again, helplessly. Now that fate has severed our bond in this third life, where will the two of us go from here?…
Thank you, baby~~~I will work hard to improve~~~~I really need to read more books~~
Mimi... Let's take a look at your article... In fact, we should pay more attention to psychological description. The novel cannot be said to be all about psychological description, but psychological description should be considered the top priority, so you should pay attention to it. The writing style... I always feel that there is still something missing, maybe it's the feeling of flowing clouds and flowing water. If you want to write ancient Chinese, the main thing is to read more books~! It will be of great help to improve yourself. Overall, it's pretty good. I will always pay attention to Mimi's articles. Mimi, don't think I'm so lazy, otherwise no matter how good the article is, it will lose popularity because it is not updated for a long time. Come on Mimi~! Clear snow character
It feels pretty good~ It aroused my interest in watching it from the beginning~
Not bad
It's just that the progress of the psychological description feels a bit too fast...
The plot is okay, but the writing still needs refinement
The plot is okay, but the writing still needs refinement
Not bad~~~Come on
Ah...
How to say, overall I am quite looking forward to it (will there be more chapters?)
It's better to rhyme the first two lines. It feels so weird to see "~" in ancient Chinese characters==b... Do you dare to make it more beautiful for me==b
Hoho, I'm being harsh, come on~
. . . It's still from ancient times~ It's okay~ The last sentence is very impressive~
Not bad~ Come on~ Mimi
Thank you, baby~~~I will work hard to improve~~~~I really need to read more books~~
Mimi... Let's take a look at your article... In fact, we should pay more attention to psychological description. The novel cannot be said to be all about psychological description, but psychological description should be considered the top priority, so you should pay attention to it. The writing style... I always feel that there is still something missing, maybe it's the feeling of flowing clouds and flowing water. If you want to write ancient Chinese, the main thing is to read more books~! It will be of great help to improve yourself. Overall, it's pretty good. I will always pay attention to Mimi's articles. Mimi, don't think I'm so lazy, otherwise no matter how good the article is, it will lose popularity because it is not updated for a long time. Come on Mimi~! Clear snow character
It feels pretty good~ It aroused my interest in watching it from the beginning~
Not bad It's just that the progress of the psychological description feels a bit too fast...
The plot is okay, but the writing still needs refinement
The plot is okay, but the writing still needs refinement
Not bad~~~Come on
Ah... How to say, overall I am quite looking forward to it (will there be more chapters?) It's better to rhyme the first two lines. It feels so weird to see "~" in ancient Chinese characters==b... Do you dare to make it more beautiful for me==b Hoho, I'm being harsh, come on~
. . . It's still from ancient times~ It's okay~ The last sentence is very impressive~