Hunting the Stars [Reborn]

Haha, I really like to be possessive and aggressive.

I don't know if it was my imagination, but the ending seemed a bit hasty, like a war, which dragged on for a long time in the early stage, but ended in a blitzkrieg in the end. However, it was quite enjoyable to read the previous part. I hope the writing will get better and better *▽*

Like (≧▽≦)/Thank you so much

The author's writing style is good, but unfortunately the early frame design is too grand and the suspense is a bit too much, but the ending at the end is a bit too hasty, but at least the main plot is fully introduced. Overall a good article, but too. . Too short! What about the thickness and length you promised? (メ`[]?)/

Personally, I think, overall, the beginning is very good, but the ending is anticlimactic. . . The villain seems to have a large layout and powerful forces in front of him, and he can be easily defeated so quickly. I can write at least twenty or thirty chapters.

Congratulations on the completion blah blah blah blah

Sprinkle flowers! ! Let me ask a question! ! Is there - extra - extra -! ! ! !

. . . . . I don't understand what's so lockable about the previous chapter. . . . . . . Confused

Do whatever you want—— Cough cough cough serious

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