Something Seems Off About the Plot [Apocalypse]

... Is this the end? ? I felt that Lingzhi was confused and the emotional line was vague. After watching it, I don't know how the two of them looked at each other. Also, the car was driving inexplicably. I felt that the emotional line was not developing quite right.

I forgot to read the comments first. It's hard to get into the mood of this article, and there are really many pitfalls. It should be said that no pair of cp has many ending settings, but it is inexplicably stiff and the most important thing in the early stage of a doomsday article is time. Shouldn't the most important thing in the early stage of the article be time? You have made such a leap, and months have passed at every turn. Are the last few major bases good people? In this TV series, they are the real villains. What did Jiang Shuihan do wrong and the base director? There is no mention of any conspiracy or experiment. The biggest gangster has no mention of what kind of victim Su Xiaoruo is. Helping the perpetrators and covering up. Jiang Shuihan has always emphasized that she is progressing very quickly. Judging from the settings of other novels, the protagonist is at most a third-level heroine who can survive to level 5. But Jiang Shuihan is at least level 7 and above, and the tide will only rise. This is really outrageous. The level division is blurred, the world view is blurred, the emotional line is blurred, and the ending is not round. The tube kills and is buried.

How did Jia Le and Ruo Sha come to separate? ? How did you end up with good people? ? Who is the other little girl? ? ? ???

I can't see the halo of the protagonist, and there are two confused people getting together!

After a few days, I still felt like I might be Shi Lezhi before I persisted in reading this book. In fact, it doesn't matter whether I put Lily in the category or not. Anyway, the emotional line of the protagonist is not obvious or touching at all. The whole book is full of inexplicable descriptions and various sub-CPs that take up half of the page... There are all kinds of unfilled holes, big and small, and all kinds of illogical logic. To be honest, I also want to say pay back the money. There are so many shortcomings that I don't even know where to start.

Also, at the end, the two heroines travel back to the present world together. Do you really not remember the setting of your other heroine? Characters in the novel! How to get back to the present world? ? How did it come out? ? ?

And there are so many sub-CPs... There are so many small holes that have not been filled. Are things about the end of the world just gone? Where is the good man and his wife? Where is the brother-in-law? Where are the two of Sanjian? What about the Yuan family's heart disease? Did you say that the ghost father will become handsome? Where is Pang Heyang and the one named Sun? Since you have written a deputy cp, there must be results, right? Otherwise, why would you write it? What's going on behind the Blue Lagoon? Where is Qin Nan? Since you want to go back to your previous life, why do you write that messy plot-changing thing that will end the story completely? He also specifically said that this is a fan story and the world will not collapse in the apocalypse. And the heroine's presence is too weak, she always feels like a puppet. The other heroine is inexplicably very powerful and she doesn't explain clearly what she is doing? This is the first book that I forgot the names of the two protagonists within a minute of reading it... What's the situation between Su Shi and the water superpower? Who replaces whom? Can you explain it clearly? I always feel like I can't go back to my previous life anymore.

It's so boring, the protagonist has no thoughts of his own, the emotional scenes are vague, the tense atmosphere of the apocalypse is not written out, and he doesn't look for his brother's only relative. It only started with the last few pictures. I really don't know how I finished reading it. It takes about three pages per second, and the ending is generally lackluster. Ox.

At once. . . . Very speechless.