He and she were two parallel lines, yet it was as if fate had ordained that they would intersect. But what came after that brief meeting?
Several decades and a few profound loves, all wounded by ill-fated misunderstandings. Was it time, fate, or fortune...?
Alas, the clouds of Yiyun dispersed forever, and Qingqiu would never bloom again!
Thanks to Jiang Ying, a reader who wrote this lovely poem for the hero and heroine:
“Spring in the Painted Hall”
The breeze knows nothing of worldly love. Why does it dance into the mortal realm? Autumn leaves and autumn lamps remain in my heart, sorrow filling half a lifetime.
A bell rings at midnight, startling me from a dream. A fragrant soul seems vaguely familiar. Her orchid-like grace has vanished beyond my reach, leaving only an echo beneath the strings.
Here is the poem I wrote for the heroine myself. Don't laugh!
By a lonely lamp, I recall the past: bold and impassioned, loyal and true, a woman among men, famed throughout the martial world. Then suddenly I became another man's wife. A daughter's tenderness warmed my life.
Who could have guessed our parting would come so soon, one living and one dead, with endless regret? Had I known it would end this way, why would I have held back my love? Even now, though my love remains deep, in this lonely place there is no one to hear!
P.S. This is a bonus story by the author, a follow-up to the Taiwanese version of “Wrath of the Sword and Wildflower.” It can also be read as a standalone work by those who haven't seen the TV series!
This, this, it turns out that there is still something wrong with Mou Ling, hehe. Squat down and the author replies: Sweat... Wood, this hole has been filled with soil for a long time. Hehe, thank you for your support~
I firmly support the divorce of Ye Moumou
Although Xue was making trouble again and again, she knew in her heart that once the idea of the ending was formed, it could no longer be changed. The tragedies of Su Linglan and Ye Qingqiu are more or less connected to the fate and happiness of some people. Shen Xiaoxuan is one of them. He was destined not to be happy. Although he wanted happiness and wanted to give her happiness, and could give her happiness, what he could give her was never what she wanted. Suddenly, happiness with this man turned into a lifetime of sorrow. If you watch too many tragedies, you will sometimes feel helpless. The feelings for those who are infatuated can only be sad, and there is never happiness at all. If you think about it too much, your heart will hurt severely. These people always end up in tragedy, and spend the rest of their lives recalling the past in the world of loss. Some even lose the opportunity to remember, because they even gave their lives. I can't help but wonder, is it worth it? Although Ling'er's writings now only have a few thousand words, and Shen's positive descriptions are only a few words, she doesn't know why she suddenly and inexplicably moved her heart. Maybe it's because of the name, Shen Xiaoxuan, Shen. At first glance, it feels like Shen. There is always a kind of implicit and calm contained in it. If you taste it carefully, it is meaningful. There is also the word "Xuan". I don't know why, but I have had a strong preference for this word since I was a child. I feel that there is always an impenetrable charm flowing out of it. When I see it and hear it, I feel safe and secure. Maybe I'm just obsessed with the charm of this name, Shen, Xiao, Xuan. It's not because of the sentence "I saw a handsome young man in light yellow clothes standing in front of me with sword-shaped eyebrows and starry eyes", but because of such a simple and ordinary sentence. "The person coming is none other than Shen Xiaoxuan, the son of the Shen family, a famous martial arts family in Luoyang." I don't mean to be dismissive by saying it is simple or ordinary. I just feel that the clearer the description, the more it can arouse people's reverie and leave more room for aftertaste. Such sentences are the essence. They are as plain as water on the surface, but have a long lasting charm on the inside. Maybe I am just obsessed with the four words "Martial Arts Family". I intuitively feel that a person who deserves these four words must be a person of extraordinary brilliance and unparalleled magnificence. Maybe my heartbeat just sprouts with this natural feeling. Subconsciously, such a person can be free and elegant, can risk life and death, can be turbulent, can be smooth sailing, can be full of hardships, can... There is nothing impossible in the world, but there is only one word of love that cannot be left behind. "... Su Linglan shook her head, but stretched out her hand in front of him: "Where are my snacks? You promised to bring me cloud cakes! " Shen Xiaoxuan smiled helplessly, reached out and took out a delicate small box from his baggage: "You girl, you haven't seen me for two years, and you don't ask me if I am okay, just remember this snack! Could it be that in your heart, I am not as good as this box of snacks? " Su Linglan wrinkled her nose, reached out to take the snack, took out a piece and tasted it carefully: "Everyone who comes to give gifts tells your story in detail every year. It's more lively than a storyteller, and I don't even need to ask!" When you remember my snacks, you remember me. Isn't this important? " "Okay, I don't think you're right! "Although he knew she was being messy, Shen Xiaoxuan just smiled and touched her little head..." I don't know how others felt after watching this paragraph. I just know that it was like touching the softest and warmest part of my heart, and the emotion overflowed at this moment. I envy Su Linglan, this little girl is so happy, Suddenly I really want to know the past of these two people, and I can't help but guess that Shen Xiaoxuan must have the purest emotion in the world for Su Linglan. "My hair has just covered my forehead, and I am playing in front of the door with folded flowers. My husband comes riding a bamboo horse and goes around the bed to make green plums." Such happiness must be countless, This kind of memory must be engraved in my heart, This feeling must be cherished for life, This time will definitely go away and never come back, Time passes naturally in such natural emotions Suddenly, you have shown your beauty, and my concubine is also Pingting But the little girl is still ignorant and willful, He just smiled at her confusion Pampering her willfulness without leaving any trace guarding, waiting Waiting for one day, the little girl suddenly raises her eyebrows, and his figure is etched in her bright eyes Such protection, such waiting, is also an indescribable happiness, but such happiness cannot be saved after all. Reading between the lines, searching carefully, it is like a young Dai Tian. If there had not been changes in the past, Dai Tian would have ended up like this, so sadly, his sadness deepened. Author's reply: Looking at Xueer's comments, I felt sad all of a sudden. In fact, Xuanxuan was originally set up as a supporting role, but what Mi thought was that he completely stole the limelight from the protagonist, and also earned the sympathy of countless people... I really don't know whether to call it my success or my failure...
This chapter is finished. In the next chapter, how can you make Ye Qingqiu feel embarrassed? The author replied: Didn't I tell you earlier that I was going to divorce him? Hum, even if he didn't die, I would just tell him to shed his skin...
Originally, there was no reason for me to complain before I finished the article, but I was really moved by it, and at the same time I also had some superficial thoughts that I wanted to share with the author. I like it, but I'm used to throwing bricks at people. Fortunately, judging from Ning Da's writing, he is a lively and cute person (no wonder Hu Wen is so cute), so I probably won't mind. The so-called throwing out ideas to attract new ideas, painstakingly typing so many words is just to write better and update faster for Ningda (the following is the emphasis ^_^). Let's digress and get back to the topic. Autumn bells stir wherever the breeze passes - this title is beautiful to read. Knowing the tragic ending, what came to my eyes was not a harsh farewell and sorrow, but more like a beautiful picture: a wisp of breeze passed by gently, the crisp sound of bells came from the distance in my ears, the once familiar face slowly appeared in front of my eyes, and then drifted away with the wind. Suddenly, my heart moved. There is still warmth after parting, but goodbye can only be seen in a blur. When the memories pass by, we burst into tears. The characters in the play, Linglan, are like this; Xiaoxuan is like this; Qingqiu is like this. Whenever I read Ning Da's articles, I always think of that spring afternoon when I suddenly encountered the elf's smile. Warmth flows. At the beginning of the article, there is this sentence: One day in early spring, the warm wind blew outside the Purple Butterfly Valley, and the flowers and plants were fragrant. The words are short and profound, and the brightness strikes people. The protagonist appears in such a scene. She is smart, cute and naughty. Transformed into a man's body, he can be seen as charming and free-spirited. What an interesting person this is! An interesting person met a very boring person at the beginning, Li Lanzhen. Su Linglan, Li Lanzhen. Both of their names have the sound of lan (sorry, I have to talk about something else. My name is Lanlan in Jinjiang, and Slan in Tianya. My family likes blue every day. Lan and I have an indissoluble bond. I love little lan without limit). The sound is similar but the perception is very different. Su's surname is Ya, and Li's surname is Rui. Liang Yusheng wrote about a very famous woman named Li, Li Shengnan, who had a fierce temper. The word Ling is smart and the word Zhen is serious. Therefore, just by looking at the author's intention in choosing these two names, we can also detect clues about the difference in their temperaments. The first round of competition between the two quickly started in front of the male protagonist. The author's setting is that the male protagonist is so "painful" (can it not be painful when your lover keeps playing petty tricks, pitiful, touch, by the way... Forget it, let's keep taking advantage of Xuanxuan) and "deeply" love Li Lanzhen. But as the plot unfolds, Suzuran's magnanimity and intelligence clearly gain the upper hand in the male protagonist's heart. There is no love involved at this time. Ye Qingqiu is not a fool and should be able to decide which of the two women is better. Therefore, the two later got along with each other and cherished each other everywhere. The simple friendship between men and women is equally touching. But everyone still looks forward to the love inserted in the gap. Alas, how can I put it this way? The love of young people (Ye and Li must have been childhood sweethearts), especially the love of ancient people, is pedantic and stubborn. Therefore, Ye Qingqiu's accommodation of Li Lanzhen in every possible way is just an attachment to the past, so it cannot be harsh. We cannot expect people in the past to be as decisive about love as people today. The divorce rate is much lower than it is now. The engagement success rate is much higher. When we are wondering how Su Linglan will fight for love in a reasonable and reasonable manner. Shen Xiaoxuan appeared. Since we have already subconsciously regarded Ye Qingqiu as the male protagonist (probably due to the malicious guidance of a certain bell, hum), then the appearance of Shen Xiaoxuan is nothing more than a male supporting actor who is bound to fail in the reader's mind. Most people like to focus on the male protagonist, because that probably embodies the author's most erotic efforts. When we read articles, isn't it just for YY? Something amazing happened. Under the premise that Shen Xiaoxuan was bound to lose and that Shen Xiaoxuan was his mistress, we were all attracted to him silently and fell into the bottomless abyss of nymphomaniacs. Shen Xiaoxuan is like another manifestation of that important person in our hearts. He is handsome (nonsense, who wouldn't be handsome if he isn't), infatuated (the obvious affection he shows when touching Su Linglan's little head is consistent with Su Linglan's gentle temperament), and sunny (sunnyer than my family every day, who probably still has a little RPWT every day, this Ya's actually got a lot of rice), broad-minded (Linglan left with Qingqiu and didn't mind; Linglan took care of Qingqiu for a year, and ignored all the gossip), strong in martial arts (I won't give an example, it's obvious), and has a distinguished family background (YY's capital). Such a man, in front of any woman, would probably make her heart beat two hundred times, wishing to meet him before we were married (mainly referring to people like me who have already boarded a pirate ship). And it just so happens that Suzuran's temperament is so closely related to his, that for those of us who are evil-minded but not capable (we can't get through), it's a pleasure to watch the couple. It's a pity that Shen Xiaoxuan is bound to lose! We return from dreams to reality. Ning Da is so cruel. The singing of birds and the fragrance of flowers at the beginning turned out to be a deception, and tragedy has come with its footsteps, waving fallen leaves like autumn. But there is no way to blame Ning Da, the words are still full of warmth. Linglan uses her kindness, wisdom and freedom to melt the sharp hatred and heart-breaking pain into the invisible bit by bit. Her behavior is as lively as a child, but her handling of things can be described as grand. Such a woman. Shen Xiaoxuan was naturally reluctant to let go. And Ye Qingqiu, who had experienced the pain of losing his lover, how could he not be attracted after spending time with Suzulan day and night without any barriers? The sharpness of the five slaps is not a blame but a pity; the meticulous care in every aspect is not a feeling but a heart. He, Ye Qingqiu, could deal with the Xifan people's problems calmly, but he didn't know what to do under this uncontrollable emotion. On the other side, the infatuated man is still waiting. Where should Lily of the Valley's love go? Seeing this, I felt as if I could hear the sound of zither and harp flowing down from the mountains in the distance. I gradually became confused and didn't know where I landed. Obsessing over love affairs is the most common mistake when writing a review. I wrote a thousand and seventy-eight words intermittently, but I didn't know what to say. Hehe. Here I will talk about my personal understanding of the novel and the use of Ning Da's words. Ning Da's writing is more elegant, with few descriptions of scenery, compact stories, strong tension, and no sense of procrastination. Although the text is concise, the explanation is quite detailed. It does not deliberately describe psychological activities, but the characters come to life through actions and language. The clues of the whole story are relatively clear and the progress is very smooth step by step. As for the part about Ye Qingqiu solving a difficult problem, it was written very grandly and convincingly, and it used typical events very effectively. This is an advantage. Then there are the shortcomings: First, the sentence segmentation is not neat enough. Some sentences describe two actions in one sentence, which is a bit long. It is recommended to separate them with commas to make them more concise. Second, the chapters are not very coherent. Perhaps due to the long absence of updates, the connections between each chapter are a bit abrupt. Usually something happens here, a plot is written, and it goes to another place without any excess. Maybe I'm being pretentious in this regard, so you can ignore my brick wall. The third is that the supporting roles are too omitted. For example, the death of Li Lanzhen was written about this person in such great detail before, but her death was briefly mentioned. This resulted in Ye Qingqiu's subsequent pain over her passing being not accepted by readers. Because no one felt how tragic her death was, there was no sympathy. Then there was Xiao Yuran, who appeared very suddenly without any introduction, so we had to accept his name and identity, making this person look like a prop tree, and we had no impression at all in our minds. Therefore, you can omit the part that should be omitted, but you have gone too far in omitting it. After all, it's not just the protagonist who lives in your novel! Uh, I feel like this brick was hit a bit hard, Ning Dayu clicked and picked it up! Fourth, as I mentioned, there are some places that are a bit too deliberate, such as the scene where Ye Qingqiu's sweat dripped on the ground. I have expressed different opinions, so I won't go into details here. As for five, this brick is a bit too demanding. Ning Da, I think the description of the palace in your article is not thrilling enough. Of course you are not writing about political power, nor about the harem, but the people and things in the palace are still a bit too simple. Well, it felt like the slapping was heavy again, so Ning Da continued to take the shots leisurely. Let's write a knot. I like reading Ning Da's articles very much. I like her warmth and like her biological mother. Even a sad article can still let us see where happiness lies. As for the shortcomings, I picked them with a very strict attitude. Ning Da, after all, you are just writing a fanfic. You have very little time to write it, and you probably finished it all in one go. So, I am very impressed by the quality. Not much to say, Ning Da, update is king. Author's reply: Wow, such a long comment really moved me to tears... That, I won't say anything anymore, I will continue to support you, and I will continue to comment after I write more... (A certain scene: Lushan Waterfall...)
Xiao Benling, the link is in the author's column. By the way, I'll make mine too~ Author's reply: Shit, I just got here, so it's normal that I'm not familiar with the roads... Lots of support! Author's reply: Already made a link to a certain lan^*^ My learning ability is still very strong...
There are only over 40,000 words published here. Mouling, you should be ashamed, no wonder we don't read enough. The author replied: Sweat... I, I can only keep working hard...
Yes, yes, Ling'er has also sent a message to Jinjiang. Please provide a link. Author's reply: Haha, of course you can make a link, but how do you do it? Sweat…