They are soldiers,
They are assault troops,
What are their women like??
A little fanfiction, a little invention. If anything seems familiar, great minds think alike!
To "Whatever":
Thanks for the song you shared. It sums up pretty much every current fanfic about *The Assault*! But please take note!!!
1. Old A hunting down drug dealers was part of the original show. If you have a problem with that, take it up with Lan Xiaolong.
2. The Ministry of State Security isn't all-powerful. If it could solve everything, Old A would be nothing but dead weight. Take that up with the government agencies.
3. From the looks of it, you're a man, so you don't understand how women see the captain. What a joke: the captain can't fall in love? He's just Old A, not some old monk.
4. Do you even know what "love" means? During the earthquake the other day, a mother instinctively shielded her daughter beneath her when disaster struck. That's "love". I suggest you look at more moving pictures.
5. Old A is badass, so why can't the enemy be badass too? You really think Old A is invincible? If that were true, the whole world would have been unified ages ago. Did you just transmigrate here from the Qin Dynasty?
The thing you hate most, and find hardest to understand, is probably that you got jolted by some third-rate, wish-fulfillment romance. But there's a popular saying these days: "If this gives you chills, click the red X in the upper-right corner. Turn left when you leave, no need to say goodbye." Since you summed it up, that means you read it, and took it to heart, Orz~ If you go looking for trouble yourself, sorry, but go to the nearest hospital. There's no specialist here to help you.
How about adding another one: "Sixth, hate unfinished stories that leave a bunch of heroes buried alive"?
Still, thank you for reading my ridiculous story and offering so many fair comments. If possible, please lend me your flawless masterpiece, the one that won't give anyone chills, so I can read it. Thanks again.
Theme:
So I found that we have a lot in common... For example, we love soldiers, love Zhanzhao, love Jibu, and love peace!
If everyone is so picky, Mr. Lan Xiaolong's original work may not be without any errors.
First, it's not that I'm picky, but your bug is so big that it was found without picking it out.
Second, yes, no one can make mistakes without being a sage, but Lan Xiaolong definitely did not make such a big mistake. The predecessor of "Soldier's Assault" is "Erna Assault", which won the Lao She Literature Award and the Cao Yu Drama Award, so it is definitely officially certified. Even if it is, it is extremely elegant and I don't think it is such a fatal and serious mistake.
If you can't stand others, that is, me, pointing out and finding fault with your bugs, then I just want to say, you'd better not post them online, otherwise it will happen sooner or later.
I just want to say that writing fan fiction is not a problem, but is it so difficult to respect the original work? Since you want to write, can't you be more dedicated?
The author who doesn't even know how to say hello to you:
1. This question, have you ever learned about JUNDUI in China? Jundui is for external affairs, while armed police is for internal affairs. Basically, when it comes to domestic security incidents, all the people involved are armed police. Please note that the plot of cracking down on drug criminals in the original book crosses national borders, and the armed police are involved first. Finally, when it comes to international issues, Old A is the one who goes there. Sir, when will the problem of not reading the original work and not understanding the information be corrected~
Two national security. . . . Oh my god. . . . . National security is the National Security Agency. . . . This refers to the meaning of Old A being investigated all day long in the fanfic. . . . Oh my God, do you understand this? . . .
... This deserves its own chapter?
Captain, company commander, they are all very powerful. Who is worthy of them? Someone as powerful as them. Men are normal; women, are they? Even if it is true, if a woman is so powerful, does she still need a man? The most important thing is that no one can tolerate such a powerful woman.
After reading this article and the comments above, I have to say:
Comrade casual, you are too unprofessional. You are clearly called casual. Is it possible that the word casual has a new meaning recently?
——By keke who thinks his Chinese proficiency is pretty good
To the author comrades:
The article is short and concise, and although the writing is a bit green, it makes people feel cute. The perspective is unique and successfully expresses your thoughts. Naturally, there are still some shortcomings, but they are not harmful. After all, it is the first time to write an article, and there is a process for everything, so if you are interested in starting a new work, please work hard.
In addition, I don't have the habit of making up for points, so I seldom show up. This time is one of the few exceptions. Although it is not a good habit, I have never thought about changing it.
Wang Haihan.
Author's reply:
\(0^◇^0)/Thank you! ! Hug! !
I'm bored~~Bored~~I'm also giving points when I drink water~~
I've read the article and the comments~~I'm really bored, bored~~
The package of ls... "I am simply speechless" (borrowed~~)
I can see that you really love "Soldier Assault"
Even the content in the book is easy to pick up, and Xiaosheng admires it~
That jingle you (reposted) is really hard to understand without someone who has read all the "Soldier Assault" fan fiction to illustrate it. It turns out that this is what it means, Orz
"I just want to say that writing fan fiction is not a problem, but is it so difficult to respect the original work? Since you have to write, can't you be more dedicated?"
"Oh, I usually write about Danmei. If you can accept it, I will send it to you."
The above two sentences are very loving~very loving~
To put it bluntly, it's just that the writers of BL feel uncomfortable when they look at BG~~ It's understandable~ It's understandable~~ I feel the same way~~
I haven't read the original book, I'm just very interested in the TV series~
But I haven't seen any expression of the deep love of "husband and wife" in Olive Green (by the way, the word "husband and husband" is really not a phrase)
I really don't know if Lan Xiaolong and other main creators will vomit blood if they watch BG or if they vomit blood if they watch BL~~
Although I prefer watching BL~ ah~ (forgive me for wiping the nosebleed~~) the psychological transformation there~ awkward and embarrassing~ something like that~~ (looking at the sky... I am a cj...)
I think bg satisfies the beautiful psychology of the majority of female compatriots (including me) who yearn for a good husband~
Science fiction~ Sui Da, you really read this article very highly~ There is no shadow of imagination in this article~ The young couple laughed a lot~
Besides, I don't think the poster would want to use this article to compete for the Lao She Literature Award and the Cao Yu Drama Award~
Suida, why are you so excited~~
BD~ The principle there is not the principle of "let it sink if you don't want to see it again"~
You know, don't be punctual every month, okay? It's very hard~
By the way~~Owner~~
Don't you think the total number of words in this message has to catch up with the number of words in your article~~
There's a side story that doesn't even look like it's finished, so many heroes were killed~
Don't blame me for posting it in this form. . . . . . It was all forced by the old monster of Jinjiang. . . . . . I can't even get a piece of it but they won't let me send it out. . . . . . .
Actually, I made a very long comment before, but I don't know why it was hacked by jinjiang, so I'll make it short again.
I think the main reason why your article exists and is still standing is that the people in Jinjiang are too tolerant. Really, there are people who hate every word in Jinjiang, so I strongly recommend you to go to post. Baidu. Com.
Art originates from life and is higher than life.
Well, your question has nothing to do with art, and what you wrote has nothing to do with art. But it is indeed higher than life, because you write it like science fiction.
Finally" Alas. . . . You just want the original author of the jingle to die with hatred again. . . . . How do you want me to say hello? . . . It is recommended to send your article to post. Baidu. Com. . . . I'm just speechless. . . . . . . The people there will teach you well. . .
All I can say is, please respect the creators of Lan Xiaolong and Yiqian Soldier Assault, and please respect the original work when writing fan fiction. This is actually the most basic requirement, but you can't do it. Many authors who shock people to death can't do it either. I don't know what you think, but I feel that if you have to write, why not write it well? Since you have to write, please clarify everything that needs to be clarified before writing. Be merciful and let Lan Xiaolong and the soldiers attack. The root of the problem is not whether I clicked the red cross or not, but that you didn't understand that you made a mistake and refused to admit it.
But I still want to thank you for reading my Raven and giving me so many pertinent opinions. If possible, please lend me your flawless and unparalleled masterpiece for me to read. Thank you again.
Oh, I usually write about Danmei. If you can accept it, I will send it to you.
So I found that we have a lot in common... For example, we love soldiers, love Zhanzhao, love Jibu, and love peace!
If everyone is so picky, Mr. Lan Xiaolong's original work may not be without any errors. First, it's not that I'm picky, but your bug is so big that it was found without picking it out. Second, yes, no one can make mistakes without being a sage, but Lan Xiaolong definitely did not make such a big mistake. The predecessor of "Soldier's Assault" is "Erna Assault", which won the Lao She Literature Award and the Cao Yu Drama Award, so it is definitely officially certified. Even if it is, it is extremely elegant and I don't think it is such a fatal and serious mistake. If you can't stand others, that is, me, pointing out and finding fault with your bugs, then I just want to say, you'd better not post them online, otherwise it will happen sooner or later. I just want to say that writing fan fiction is not a problem, but is it so difficult to respect the original work? Since you want to write, can't you be more dedicated?
The author who doesn't even know how to say hello to you: 1. This question, have you ever learned about JUNDUI in China? Jundui is for external affairs, while armed police is for internal affairs. Basically, when it comes to domestic security incidents, all the people involved are armed police. Please note that the plot of cracking down on drug criminals in the original book crosses national borders, and the armed police are involved first. Finally, when it comes to international issues, Old A is the one who goes there. Sir, when will the problem of not reading the original work and not understanding the information be corrected~ Two national security. . . . Oh my god. . . . . National security is the National Security Agency. . . . This refers to the meaning of Old A being investigated all day long in the fanfic. . . . Oh my God, do you understand this? . . .
... This deserves its own chapter?
Captain, company commander, they are all very powerful. Who is worthy of them? Someone as powerful as them. Men are normal; women, are they? Even if it is true, if a woman is so powerful, does she still need a man? The most important thing is that no one can tolerate such a powerful woman.
After reading this article and the comments above, I have to say: Comrade casual, you are too unprofessional. You are clearly called casual. Is it possible that the word casual has a new meaning recently? ——By keke who thinks his Chinese proficiency is pretty good To the author comrades: The article is short and concise, and although the writing is a bit green, it makes people feel cute. The perspective is unique and successfully expresses your thoughts. Naturally, there are still some shortcomings, but they are not harmful. After all, it is the first time to write an article, and there is a process for everything, so if you are interested in starting a new work, please work hard. In addition, I don't have the habit of making up for points, so I seldom show up. This time is one of the few exceptions. Although it is not a good habit, I have never thought about changing it. Wang Haihan. Author's reply: \(0^◇^0)/Thank you! ! Hug! !
I'm bored~~Bored~~I'm also giving points when I drink water~~ I've read the article and the comments~~I'm really bored, bored~~ The package of ls... "I am simply speechless" (borrowed~~) I can see that you really love "Soldier Assault" Even the content in the book is easy to pick up, and Xiaosheng admires it~ That jingle you (reposted) is really hard to understand without someone who has read all the "Soldier Assault" fan fiction to illustrate it. It turns out that this is what it means, Orz "I just want to say that writing fan fiction is not a problem, but is it so difficult to respect the original work? Since you have to write, can't you be more dedicated?" "Oh, I usually write about Danmei. If you can accept it, I will send it to you." The above two sentences are very loving~very loving~ To put it bluntly, it's just that the writers of BL feel uncomfortable when they look at BG~~ It's understandable~ It's understandable~~ I feel the same way~~ I haven't read the original book, I'm just very interested in the TV series~ But I haven't seen any expression of the deep love of "husband and wife" in Olive Green (by the way, the word "husband and husband" is really not a phrase) I really don't know if Lan Xiaolong and other main creators will vomit blood if they watch BG or if they vomit blood if they watch BL~~ Although I prefer watching BL~ ah~ (forgive me for wiping the nosebleed~~) the psychological transformation there~ awkward and embarrassing~ something like that~~ (looking at the sky... I am a cj...) I think bg satisfies the beautiful psychology of the majority of female compatriots (including me) who yearn for a good husband~ Science fiction~ Sui Da, you really read this article very highly~ There is no shadow of imagination in this article~ The young couple laughed a lot~ Besides, I don't think the poster would want to use this article to compete for the Lao She Literature Award and the Cao Yu Drama Award~ Suida, why are you so excited~~ BD~ The principle there is not the principle of "let it sink if you don't want to see it again"~ You know, don't be punctual every month, okay? It's very hard~ By the way~~Owner~~ Don't you think the total number of words in this message has to catch up with the number of words in your article~~ There's a side story that doesn't even look like it's finished, so many heroes were killed~
Don't blame me for posting it in this form. . . . . . It was all forced by the old monster of Jinjiang. . . . . . I can't even get a piece of it but they won't let me send it out. . . . . . .
Actually, I made a very long comment before, but I don't know why it was hacked by jinjiang, so I'll make it short again. I think the main reason why your article exists and is still standing is that the people in Jinjiang are too tolerant. Really, there are people who hate every word in Jinjiang, so I strongly recommend you to go to post. Baidu. Com. Art originates from life and is higher than life. Well, your question has nothing to do with art, and what you wrote has nothing to do with art. But it is indeed higher than life, because you write it like science fiction.
Finally" Alas. . . . You just want the original author of the jingle to die with hatred again. . . . . How do you want me to say hello? . . . It is recommended to send your article to post. Baidu. Com. . . . I'm just speechless. . . . . . . The people there will teach you well. . . All I can say is, please respect the creators of Lan Xiaolong and Yiqian Soldier Assault, and please respect the original work when writing fan fiction. This is actually the most basic requirement, but you can't do it. Many authors who shock people to death can't do it either. I don't know what you think, but I feel that if you have to write, why not write it well? Since you have to write, please clarify everything that needs to be clarified before writing. Be merciful and let Lan Xiaolong and the soldiers attack. The root of the problem is not whether I clicked the red cross or not, but that you didn't understand that you made a mistake and refused to admit it. But I still want to thank you for reading my Raven and giving me so many pertinent opinions. If possible, please lend me your flawless and unparalleled masterpiece for me to read. Thank you again. Oh, I usually write about Danmei. If you can accept it, I will send it to you.