Stealing Stars and Transmigrating into The Lost Tomb

What kind of hobby is darkness? Another Chinese teacher died early in the series

Well, it seems that I am suffering from embarrassment syndrome. It may be because of the age difference. I am already past the second stage of secondary school, which is a bit unacceptable. But I still hope that the author will continue to work hard.

Rewrite? Okay, I support you. It's fine if you don't cheat.

Plagiarism plus poor writing skills by Mary Sujia, the author ruined Laojiumen and also ruined Stealing Stars

Why is this article exactly the same as a clip from a Laojiumen fanfic I've read?????

Sorry, could the author pay more attention to the characters when writing the article? Really, what you wrote was so successful. You succeeded in destroying Zhang Dafoye and all the cadres. You are really so talented! I think every girl has a girlish heart and wants a beautiful and sweet love, but can she not be so Mary Sue? Can you not take it for granted?! The author didn't take the plot of the story and the background of the characters into consideration at all when he wrote it. It was just because he was bored. If he thought it was wrong, the author couldn't be more than fifteen or sixteen years old, right? The writing is too poor, the plot develops too fast, and it places a huge burden on the heroine. In a scene describing Er Er Hong, the author writes like this: Er Er Hong's face changed completely when she heard it, but she still had no expression on her face. Her face changed completely, but she still had no expression? Author, how did you do it? There was a short scene when the heroine and Lord Buddha were getting along: the heroine wanted to tease Lord Buddha, so she kissed him. Oh my God! Do you have to kiss someone to be funny?! What's even more terrifying is that Buddha is blushing... Under normal circumstances, you and a stranger, a stranger who is guarded, are very strange, and it is a one-time relationship. He (she) comes to kiss you, and you are not angry. You are still shy, blushing, and enjoying it. I just want to say, go to the hospital for treatment... The heroine and Buddha arrived at February Red's territory and met some bad guys. If I read it correctly, it was in Japanese, right? Lord Buddha will not suspect that you are Japanese? Originally, it was a special situation at that time, but you still said that, Gu Liang, it depends on the time to show off, right? Author, in one of your sentences, I saw a word appearing frequently. Didn't your Chinese teacher teach you that it would be easy to give others the impression that you are short of words? Is it okay if the teacher who corrects the paper gives you a kickback for your score?! In short, this story is cliched and poorly written. I stopped reading after one or two chapters. It doesn't attract readers' interest at all, okay? I originally thought that the plot would be better later on, but it turned out... It was just a nymphomaniac, and the author was just in the same tone as the previous one. I have to say that it makes sense that this article is not good...

Come on, come on↖(^ω^)↗

Wenwen is not bad, but everyone has different opinions. Please don't overreact.

The heroine is so stupid! You are even more stupid for being able to write such an article!

How come there are Mary Sues everywhere!!!!!! Can you stop your obscenity! Don't tarnish the world of Laojiumen!!!!