
Hunter: When the Captain Appears in the Hunter World
猎人当猎人世界出现兵长
- Status
- –
- Length
- 33k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Updated
- 8y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
21Chapters
485Favorites
8Nutrient gifts
11.7kClicks per chapter
150Comments
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Ahem... I looked at the latest update date, it was still in 2018, but now it is the second half of 2019. I hope you don't give up and continue updating! Out of love for the soldier, I finished reading it in one sitting. I have a little bit of impressions that I would like to share with you, and by the way, I will give you my first long review~ I won't talk about whether the character collapses or not, because after all, each author has a different understanding of the character, and they are fans! So it's okay! The first thing I want to say is the title of the chapter. I think... It is better to write a title for each chapter. Titles are very important for both readers and authors. When we watch anime, every chapter has a title, right? The title can let people know what the content of this chapter is. The first few chapters still had titles, but then they all turned into numbers for some reason. It felt weird~ Some chapters are titled "Continuing Chapter". I think it's better not to put such a title. Instead, directly grab the key content in the article and write a rough title. For example, in Chapter 7, the key content is that the soldier commander met the brigade for the first time and finally joined it, right? The title can be directly put as "First Meeting" or "Joining the Brigade", so that readers will roughly know that the soldier commander joined in this chapter. When writing the article, you can quickly flip through it if you forget the plot, and you don't have to start reading slowly from the first chapter! As for the word count of chapters, I personally think that 2,000 words per chapter is just right. Some chapters are more than 500 words. It would be better to enrich the content a little! The last thing I want to say is the story. Overall, it doesn't have any big problems, but after reading it, I found... Why does it seem to be everyone's daily life? A tour group! You should grab something, right? That way can enhance the relationship between companions (?) And also show everyone's strength. After all, everyone inside is a master of fighting, so maybe you can bring out this charm! But then the soldier commander said he was going to the arena, so he seemed to be preparing to describe the battle, and then he stopped updating... (Crying) It feels like I got Ani's crystal so easily, and I don't think it's of any use for the moment, but maybe I'll be ready to talk about it later, so I'll just sit back and wait~ The above is my little impression after reading it. I hope you don't dislike it and let's work hard together!! Long live the commander~~hahahahaha!!
Ah, Levi, faith. It's not an idol, it's not a male god, it's faith!
The soldier is 1.6 Meters long, which is taller than Feitan.
Shorty x Shorty (cover neck)
It's been 22 years, why don't we update it?
Stepping into a huge pit
The author has spent two fucking years adjusting his mood.
. . . He knew Yangyang's line explanations and read them too.
Come on! I'm here to update! My Yangyang family is so nice, but you don't like it. Even if you don't like it, don't involve others~
A true confidant is someone who has opposite interests to the other person, but neither of them will mention it intentionally.