Fish Every Year

After a cursory reading, the language is more modern and urban style. The author's reply: Well, at first I wanted to be literary, but my teeth were sore after piling up the rhetoric, so the writing style later will be more casual. I will try to find a balance point. I mainly want to imitate the vernacular novels of the late Qing Dynasty, which are easy to narrate without being verbose, and at the same time have good descriptions, such as. . . .

Pay attention to the structure, leave some suspense, and have good characterization. Author's reply: Thank you for your opinion. I just noticed this problem. I didn't pay much attention to it before, so each chapter and each section can almost stand on its own, which is a big shortcoming. Because the writing is random, the structure is a bit loose, the plot is slow, and there are no fluctuations. I will make modifications after the overall conclusion is finalized^_^

The writing style is fresh and good, but the words need more consideration

Not bad, good, keep going, come on

It's pretty good, waiting for the update...

Running around naked for twenty years...=. =

Work hard Author's reply: Definitely, (*^__^*) Hehe...

In the Tang Dynasty, Xiyao stood at the front, and Xiyao came second. Two Xiyao authors replied: Thanks for the advice, it has been modified. Your valuable opinions are welcome!

So good! Not the same as others. Author's reply: ^_^Thanks for the compliment, I will definitely be unique and innovative. Comments are welcome.

. . . . . It turns out that the young lady is even younger than that guy. I thought the old cow wanted to eat young grass. The author replied: Sweat… It's just a plot setting. This person's identity is mysterious and will be revealed later. Comments are welcome...