Not bad. Although there are some problems with the writing, the overall concept is still good. Good luck to the author.
Let's learn about typesetting. It's so tiring to read, but this chapter is better than the previous chapters. Things like writing skills will gradually improve. After all, no one is born with the ability to write books.
Come on, author. Writing is something you develop slowly.
First of all, regardless of the writing style, the number of words must be readable. No matter how much is added at the end, the previous ones should also be made up. To be honest, my first reaction after reading the first chapter was: Surprise - being cheated - anger
It feels like you are trying to get clicks.
The ones behind are made up for, and the ones in front cannot be left behind. Otherwise, I would have given up without even reading the first chapter. I wanted to read the remaining words before skipping.
Secondly, you need to learn to segment. This segmentation is different from those in composition. You can read more works of great masters.
If you feel that I offend you and make you feel that this is unreasonable, I write novels naturally with my own style and my ideas. It doesn't matter if no one reads them. As long as I am happy, that's all. Then i'm sorry and apologize
Come on big i support you
Not bad. Although there are some problems with the writing, the overall concept is still good. Good luck to the author.
Let's learn about typesetting. It's so tiring to read, but this chapter is better than the previous chapters. Things like writing skills will gradually improve. After all, no one is born with the ability to write books.
Come on, author. Writing is something you develop slowly.
First of all, regardless of the writing style, the number of words must be readable. No matter how much is added at the end, the previous ones should also be made up. To be honest, my first reaction after reading the first chapter was: Surprise - being cheated - anger It feels like you are trying to get clicks. The ones behind are made up for, and the ones in front cannot be left behind. Otherwise, I would have given up without even reading the first chapter. I wanted to read the remaining words before skipping. Secondly, you need to learn to segment. This segmentation is different from those in composition. You can read more works of great masters. If you feel that I offend you and make you feel that this is unreasonable, I write novels naturally with my own style and my ideas. It doesn't matter if no one reads them. As long as I am happy, that's all. Then i'm sorry and apologize