Prince of Tennis: Calm and Unassuming

Overall it's pretty good, at least it's not like some online novels that have no ending. "Qing Qing Tian", as the name suggests, there are not many ups and downs. But compared to the first time I wrote it, the language and plot design are already quite good, and having such perseverance to finish writing it is commendable. From my point of view, I would like to make a few suggestions: What I am not very satisfied with is one of the plots. No matter who it is, sending Qingshuiya home too often makes it inevitably boring. One of the taboos in novels is the repetition of plots. Furthermore, the relationship between Fuji and Shimizu Masaru is too bland. Even if the relationship is deep, it cannot be understood by readers without specific plot modifications. Moreover, there are no outstanding events in the relationship between the two, and even after I read it, I couldn't remember a single detail between them. Then, some plots are too repetitive, and in the same words - a bit boring. The entry into the drama at the beginning is a bit slow. To put it bluntly, the plot at the beginning is not gripping, and it is easy for people to lose interest in reading. Not only at the beginning, but also during the process, some literary embellishments are added, such as setting up suspense, suppressing desires first, etc., Which will make it more attractive. You know, the beginning is the leader of the article. If the beginning is not successful, it means half the failure. Moreover, although it is a healing Qingshui novel, which is mainly gentle, soothing and light, it should still add some "intense" and ups and downs of the plot, otherwise it will be just like plain water and tasteless. Finally, the character image is somewhat distorted. The novel is no better than the TV series, especially the animated version. The character's characteristics, image, etc. Must be consistent. It should be said that the character's own image can emerge before the eyes of the text. It seems that except for Shimizu Masaru, the characteristics and status of other people are not particularly outstanding. I always feel that the deviation is too large, and some places are not detailed enough. Except for the protagonist, the story content of others is less, and the plot arrangement of the protagonist is also relatively simple. However, there are indeed many advantages. Some of the plots are vivid and creative, and the added characters and personalities are good, and they can be echoed from beginning to end. The plots become more exciting as they go on. Maybe they have really adapted to this pace. The language skills are quite solid, and the descriptions of the scenery are very beautiful, making it feel a bit immersive. Dialogue and other aspects are profound and thought-provoking. Overall it's pretty good, keep up the good work and look forward to your other works. Only with more experience and learning will you make progress!

It's a bit too slow to warm up, but overall it's pretty good. It's just that the characters occasionally break down.

Very interesting, the main character has a very good character

It fits Fuji's character very well. I like it.

It's so well written. I've read so many novels written by Internet kings. The heroes and heroines are not bloody, and the plots of Mary Sue's novels are very good. The author gives you a thumbs up.

Ah. . . Forgot to rate. . Make up. . .

What a long article. . . But. . . Big. . . Use dividing lines in your writing from now on. . .

I've read a lot of fanfics, and if this is the author's debut, it's pretty good. Come on!

Not bad. It suits my taste.

So happy, envious...