
The First Treacherous Minister
第一佞臣
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- Danmei (BL)
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The protagonist of this article is made too useless, but in fact he was not so useless, because many of the things the emperor did should have been handed over to him by the protagonist in his previous life, but in this life the emperor broke the protagonist's wings and destroyed the protagonist's reputation. Although the protagonist probably doesn't want to do anything real, how can such a protagonist attract readers? How can a protagonist who only wants to fall in love and be a pretty boy with an embarrassing identity attract readers? If there is a past life, the protagonist and the emperor fall in love and kill each other, have a deep sadomasochistic love, Romeo and Juliet, and finally the protagonist puts aside the dispute for the sake of the world and seduce the enemy with his body for the emperor. The plot of the emperor's grief serves as a foreshadowing, the readers are full of regrets, and the protagonist and the emperor are also full of favorability and sympathy points in the hearts of the readers, and then are reborn, the readers will naturally expect that this life will not follow the drama route of fighting for birth and only fall in love. , You will feel that the protagonist does nothing in this life, just hides in the backyard, eats soft food and falls in love. It is a compensation for the previous life, a rest after half a life of hard work in the previous life and finally ended in a bad end. For the emperor to use what he originally learned from the protagonist to gain enough popularity, it will only feel that he is sympathizing with the protagonist for the hard work in the previous life. Also, the emperor has broken the protagonist's wings and wants to keep him by his side. It will also feel that it is because of the love of the previous life. But - none of the above! ! The readers only know about the plot of the previous life with a few sentences of description from the author. Apart from a vague love and death, there is no deep impression, and naturally there is no emotional foreshadowing. Therefore, the impression of the protagonist is that of a love-struck pretty boy who only wants to fall in love. For Xiao Shou, there are only scheming men. Also, I don't know why the author arranged the plot of Xiao Shou's grandfather seeking power like that? Taking advantage of the invasion of foreign enemies and the prince being trapped, he led troops to rebel, and even led foreign enemies into the pass. Can you imagine how much harm it would cause to the people? After that, various natural and man-made disasters continued, and even God couldn't bear to see it. The most important thing was that the former emperor and his family were a very popular and kind-hearted emperor and prince. But when facing the protagonist, Xiao Shou didn't feel at all that his grandfather was sorry for Emperor Chongguang. He even had the nerve to say that his grandfather's greatest wish was for world peace? Attract foreign enemies to invade! Collaboration with the enemy and treason! Even if his grandfather is a hero, he is the most despised kind. So the things that Xiao Shou did later for his throne, his calculations against the four major families and Beiguang City felt somewhat unfair, and he had the nerve to sigh about his grandfather. The grandfather who attracted foreign enemies to invade, his greatest wish was for peace in the world? Is it because he hopes that after he takes over the world, his own world will be peaceful, not that of others? Apart from making people uncomfortable, what is the meaning of this background setting? A prince who collaborates with the enemy and treason harms the kind and virtuous emperor's family, becomes an emperor, then turns around and drives away the foreign enemies, does he become a good emperor? No wonder he lost popular support. But this setting has almost no indispensable impact on the main line. If it were changed to an emperor who was kind but incapable of controlling the court and could not intimidate the border, the prince was also captured at the border. Seeing that the court was about to fall, the ambitious and capable prince took the opportunity to drive away the foreign enemies and take over the world. However, he was grateful for the kindness of the former emperor and was dissatisfied with the prince's registration, so he ran away and retreated. Wouldn't it be possible for the protagonist and Xiao Shou to fall in love and kill each other? But it does not make Xiao Shou's origin of the throne so unbearable, and the description of the continuous natural disasters after Xiao Shou's grandfather succeeded to the throne, and the edicts of committing crimes every year makes the readers have a feeling that Xiao Shou's family has the throne and cannot get used to it. It is really intolerable to invite foreign enemies to invade! However, it made readers have this idea, but in the end it did not lead to any plot. In other words, this detail is dispensable. It has no other use except to make readers have negative thoughts about Xiao Shou's identity and position. It is better not to do it. I think maybe the author had other ideas at the beginning, but then he wrote more and more biased, and finally failed to write, and many things he originally planned to write were not written, so after reading it, I felt that this novel was not very satisfying. As mentioned at the beginning, logically speaking, the nature of this article should be a comfort novel with a compensatory nature. It is to compensate for the tragic past lives of the protagonist and Xiao Shou and to comfort the readers' emotions due to the abuse of the protagonist and Xiao Shou in their previous lives. As a result, the author did not show the readers how miserable the protagonist and Xiao Shou were in a sadistic love affair, falling in love and killing each other in their previous lives, so the readers were not tortured. The result was to simply compensate the protagonist. But why are those things a kind of compensation for the protagonist? Readers cannot emotionally understand it well, because the compensation given to the protagonist in the text is not a common sense compensation. If it is not combined with the protagonist's past life experience, simply looking at what Xiao Shou does to the protagonist is not a good thing, so there is no previous life as an emotional foreshadowing for the reader. Looking at this life alone, there is a high probability that the protagonist will feel that the protagonist is useless, Xiao Shou is too strong and calculating, the two are too unequal, etc. Originally, this article was supposed to make readers lament that the protagonist could finally be happy in this life, but instead it made readers lament that the protagonist was so useless in this life. I suggest that when the author has time and energy, it would be better to write a spin-off about his past life and put it at the front. Finally, who is Nie Chen? Where is it posted now? Please change the author's name. The Golden House Hidden Beauty is pretty good.
Finished reading! In fact, it's okay. Shou is born again. Of course, everything can be budgeted for. If it is from the perspective of the main sitter, it is the career line +++. There are indeed many things that are not clearly written about the main point of view. The emotional line can only say that one is reborn and the other is love at first sight. To be honest, it is a bit hasty. The career line is quite cool. Anyway, I know what you will definitely do, so I like it in advance. In terms of character design, Gong's personality is similar to mine. He doesn't have such big ideas and just acts like a salty fish. Even in his first life, Gong has a soft-hearted personality that is in a dilemma. Someone above said that being deprived of a lot of attack skills made him feel a little inferior. I think this inferiority complex is more due to the fact that he is useless (he is obviously an attack player but he has become a pretty boy). Even a normal attack player wants to make a difference! Later, I felt that the pretty girl was pretty good too. She just started showing off like a salted fish (personal interpretation). Overall, it was pretty good!
Xiao Gong's low self-esteem is caused by Xiao Shou, because Xiao Shou deprived Xiao Gong of the opportunity to grow and shine, making Xiao Gong a completely free-spirited pretty boy, and he also licked Xiao Shou too much.
The main character has no sense of presence and is a man
Etc. . . Banquet. . . No. . .
Damn, I'm just one copy away from reading all of your books. I'm going to start a new book soon!
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Second brush get~ It's worth reading. It's well written, but it's a little short, not enough dog food, and there are only a few chapters about love. It's a bit like Jing Xiuran's Emperor Rebirth version of the guide. Apart from being short, the career line is enough, but I can add thirty more chapters to the daily life and love lines. This love line is not as much as the banquet story. You see, the banquet story is all about an assassination, hiding in a carriage, being blocked by an arrow, unrequited love killing each other, falling off a cliff together, and a promise of love in a hospital hhhh
Ahhhhhhh it's over. Although it looks good, the name really needs to be changed. The Man Hidden in the Golden House is really good.
I read Cannon Fodder first and then read this article. It had a little bit of the feel of the story about a woman who traveled through time in a peasant family, but it was still very interesting (≧?≦)