A Softly Sung Song of Liangzhou

Fortunately, the two of them are dead~~~~~~~~Long live the big brother

The writing is good, and it is a short article, which is very comfortable. But it would be more realistic if Luan Yang died in battle!!! (Although I don't like watching tragedies)

Good Language, character design, conception, everything is fine. Appropriately add some plot points, and it would be better if it could be extended into a full length novel. Author's reply: Writing long stories is tiring... Someone admits that someone is lazy... >_<Thank you for your messages~