Ye Ruanuan can't stand Huo Qicheng.
Because the guy has bullied her since they were kids: tugging her braids, lifting her skirt, and even sneaking in pinches to her cheeks.
Huo Qicheng thinks Ye Ruanuan is a real handful.
She makes trouble, throws tantrums, and has a nasty temper. When she gets fussy, she makes him feel three years older.
But no matter how much of a handful Ye Ruanuan is, she's still the girl in his heart.
If she's his, then he won't let anyone else have her!
The author's sweet historical romances: The Hardest Thing to Resist Is Rong Lang's Kindness and Cui's Young Master Wants to Run Away. Please add them to your favorites!!
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Hahahahahaha, the eldest young master is single because of his strength.
Hahahahaha, it's good to be a dowry
La la la la ~ mighty and domineering
Overall, it's good. It's very difficult to write a sweet story. There are some abrupt points in the plot that can be corrected later if you have time, or can be avoided in future writing. For example, the little princess of the Ye family was tricked by the Zhou family, and the parents, elders, and brothers in the family came out to support the scene. This is very inappropriate. It makes sense. Since Qin Chuchu is not a bad girl, there shouldn't be a vague description of the situation from the beginning. In fact, it is enough to just write that the scumbag Zhou gave up on the little princess after weighing the pros and cons. There is no need to say that he came to the little princess to say goodbye for the last time, and it is enough to maintain his face. There is no need to whitewash.
This plot of torture for the sake of torture is too cliched and a bit inexplicable.
?? I'm hungry and want to eat sweet and sour pork ribs and stir-fried beans??
The content is repeated
The time is right, the place is right, the people are ready to have sex.
So there is no such thing as someone who unconditionally trusts his girlfriend like Xiao Nai.
It's less regrettable when the phone number is used.
Hahahahahaha, the eldest young master is single because of his strength.
Hahahahaha, it's good to be a dowry
La la la la ~ mighty and domineering
Overall, it's good. It's very difficult to write a sweet story. There are some abrupt points in the plot that can be corrected later if you have time, or can be avoided in future writing. For example, the little princess of the Ye family was tricked by the Zhou family, and the parents, elders, and brothers in the family came out to support the scene. This is very inappropriate. It makes sense. Since Qin Chuchu is not a bad girl, there shouldn't be a vague description of the situation from the beginning. In fact, it is enough to just write that the scumbag Zhou gave up on the little princess after weighing the pros and cons. There is no need to say that he came to the little princess to say goodbye for the last time, and it is enough to maintain his face. There is no need to whitewash.
This plot of torture for the sake of torture is too cliched and a bit inexplicable.
?? I'm hungry and want to eat sweet and sour pork ribs and stir-fried beans??
The content is repeated
The time is right, the place is right, the people are ready to have sex.
So there is no such thing as someone who unconditionally trusts his girlfriend like Xiao Nai.
It's less regrettable when the phone number is used.