Moved by Er Yuehong's devotion in The Mystic Nine, yet saddened that he grew old alone, I want to find him someone to stay by his side...
But I need to be prepared for what's coming, oh
This is my first time writing. I hope all you readers will give me lots of encouragement. Maybe my writing is bad, but I'm happy to accept friendly suggestions. Malicious criticism is not welcome~
The heroine is an idealized character: she can heal and fight, the standard setup...
Even I can hardly believe what I've written, so let's take it one step at a time.
★New writer, please go easy on me★
I don't like the fact that the heroine takes over someone else's body and behaves like the matron of the house. She is too ruthless towards Chen Pi. The other girl regards Chen Pi as a relative. If you take over someone else's body, you just stand on the moral high ground and hate their relatives. It doesn't matter if the author abandons the article. From what the heroine said to Lu Jianxun, it can be seen that she is a woman with no self-cultivation. She has a tough personality and speaks meanly and unreasonably. She is far worse than the girl. If the second master can let go of his beloved girl to be with her, he must have been bewitched!
I don't like the fact that the heroine takes over someone else's body and behaves like the matron of the house. She is too ruthless towards Chen Pi. The other girl treats Chen Pi as a relative. You take over someone else's body and you hate their relatives from the moral high ground. The author may as well abandon the article. , From what the heroine said to Lu Jianxun, it can be seen that she is a woman with no self-cultivation. She has a tough personality and speaks mean and unreasonable. She is far worse than the girl. If the second master can let go of his beloved girl to be with her, he must have been poisoned.
First time writing an article? Let me encourage you
Come on, I haven't updated for a long time.
Your writing is very good, keep up the good work
Update soon…
It's finally time to update, and I feel like I have to watch it from the beginning!!!
When will it be updated? Don't give up. It's very nice.
Haha, I finally found another article about the second master, so cheers up
I guess all these individuals have discovered it by now.