Reborn: The Road to Supporting My Family

Second brush. Many are locked

Finished reading! ! I also want to fully order the standard qwq!

I want to watch the rest of the plot, how the protagonist lives a prosperous life in Jing Dynasty, and how he uses his golden fingers in Jing Dynasty

Hehe, then I realized something was different.

Ahhhhhhhhhhh Really, didn't you know that Lingling had already blocked the arrow and was cured?

This ending is too tantalizing. Let's get up and catch up on the next article.

After reading Xixiangfeng and then reading this article, I can feel that the contrast between Xixiangfeng and this article is that Xixiangfeng's writing style has improved compared to this article. The problem is that the ending is not good. The highlight should be that the author is better at catching the readers' cute points, and the content looks very happy. In this article, it can also be seen that the author's writing skills are very good, and almost every scene description looks very interesting. It's fluent, and the content is not only inspirational and heartwarming, but also down-to-earth. The main problem is that the dialogue between the characters in the first twenty chapters is a bit inappropriate and somewhat OOC. The two brothers Shen Zhen said that the characters can be used to speak, but it seems that the two brothers Li Hao and other brats talk and behave in such an "old-fashioned" way, which is very strange. There is also a friend named Li Hao. I thought he was an important person and carried a lot of weight. He should also have a deep friendship with Shen Zhen and have frequent contact with her in the future. However, this is not the case. Then the ending of this article is relatively better. I can just write a review without getting into trouble. After seeing the content in the middle of this article, I have two questions: Does the copyright of the final article still belong to the author? After the book is finished, do new readers' purchases, comments, and comments still have something to do with the author? Probably the problem with the finished article is that the author rarely communicates with readers anymore, so I am too lazy to rate and comment on some chapters. I actually wanted to rate some chapters "hahahahahahaha" or make some comments or speculations, but in the end I held it back. I just decided to rate and comment on the first two chapters, and then comment on the end. OK, I have finished reading another chapter, great! (The above only represents my personal views)

Still want to see... T^T

Actually, I want to read more stories about Qian Qian & Hua Hua, but I can definitely read another one? 23333

I saw Shen Zhen and Shen Ling before, but then I stopped chasing them. I didn't expect this to be the case.