The Other Shore

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The plot concept is good, but the writing is a mess, with many pitfalls

This article is a mess... The author himself knows what he is writing... Everything is written... But nothing is written... The inexplicable plot... There is really no way out or ending... When I saw this, I was thinking... Why should they get divorced... Because the divorce did not make them change at all... Why They have to have sex with the female protagonist again... It has no effect on their relationship... Not to mention the heroine's illness... It has no effect... The author has dropped so many lines... But none of them are accurate... A bitch... A bastard... Is the most appropriate sense of this article

Is this little boy the one who appeared at the beach? And who was the man killed by Wenli? Well…

I have read a lot of articles, and to be honest, they are getting boring. But DaDa's novel gave me a different feeling. It was very enjoyable to read, the plot had ups and downs, and DaDa's writing style was also very good. Come on! Looking forward to the extra episode! (I'm sorry, I'm actually the one who's fattened up and watching. Why don't you hit me?)

It's Gold Will Shine. The author's character creation and writing skills are lacking. Come on!

Except for too many foreshadowings that have not been explained, everything else is very good. I have a small collection. Is it because this style of writing is not very popular in Jinjiang_(:з∠)_

Throw one in to express my love for you, just like the surging river, and like the Yellow River flooding out of control! Nice! Nice! Please continue writing

I can't understand anything, the plot changes here and there

I just want to know why Song Ying keeps having nosebleeds. What kind of mental illness does he have? There is no explanation.