[Big Fish & Begonia] [Zhu Song] A Vow to Keep

It looks good, but I don't dare to look at it Too short_Collect first (???????)?

Very well written! ! !

Why does Kun love Qiu?

Why is the latest chapter locked?

You said Chun has a cold personality. I only see a child who is rebellious in adolescence and has troubles with her parents. If she is really cold, will she trade her life to get Kun back? ?

I didn't think Feng was what you described in your article, I just thought she was a mother who was worried about her rebellious daughter in adolescence. She was just as nagging as our mothers, but she loved us very much. In the play, I only saw Feng's fear of the unknown dangers during her daughter's coming-of-age ceremony. There is no indifference or inhumanity reflected in the author's words. Even at the end, the heroine's mother is still wiping her ass for the heroine's crimes and has already broken her heart for the heroine. The only thing that moved me in the whole play was Feng's nagging and her tears. Moreover, the children in Shenzhiweilou are very simple. With a kind elder like Hou Tu as an example, how could there be the bullying incident you mentioned. Everyone faced the heroine who destroyed their home. Only Ting Mu's mother, who thought she had lost her son, lost control of her emotions and attacked the heroine. Even then, she did not let the heroine pay for her life, but just told her to get out. The heroine didn't even hurt the heroine's hair. Everyone just no longer accepts the heroine who destroyed their home and almost killed them, which is already lenient enough. So your inexplicable "tragic" setting is simply unacceptable! Haven't you seen everything Feng did for the heroine and her tears? ! I know it's a lie to say "no parent doesn't love their children", but Feng definitely loves Chun! Only Chun keeps breaking her mother's heart. Your setting not only distorted Chun, but also distorted Feng's maternal love. Even if a fan has a personal setting, please don't distort it, okay? In your article, Feng, who is a bit nagging but sincere about her daughter's love, turns out to be a cold and unkind person. I'm really unhappy.

Kun and Qiu are well matched, and the heroine really has nothing to say←_←

What should Tsubaki do? Will we see her again?

Personal crazy man, I wish you Rongqin

Great writing, keep it up↖(^ω^)↗