The Protagonist's Style Is All Wrong

The content of the overall story was good to me, but there were still some awkward parts. I hope the author can write a few extra stories, although it's probably not possible

I always felt that the ending was unexpected, but I really liked the setting and couldn't find any similar articles.

To be honest, don't criticize me. I really think the setting of the plot is very thoughtful, but the connection of the story is really abrupt and illogical. From the beginning to the end, it seems that the ending is rushed. I am really disappointed. I hope that if possible, such a bad ending will not happen again.

Is this a bad ending? Should the ending be so hasty? It's simply baffling. There's no clue. There's no foreshadowing at all. It's like I just write whatever comes to mind. I don't even know where to complain. There are too many flaws. Haha, I'm really disappointed.

Why, the text is locked QAQ This is not the result I want, the author has changed!

Why, the text is locked QAQ This is not the result I want, the author has changed

Not as sweet as that anchor... I believed a lot of evil things and thought they were all sweet articles in the same style. Begin to shut down. Jpg

It's amazing that I can read such a plain article, thank you so much for the author^0^~

Pfft, isn't this dialect the language of Chongqing?

It looks good. If it were a cultivator, maybe it would be more exciting?