Knocking on the Immortal Gate

Looking at the previous chapters, the author said that he wanted to establish a new view of self-cultivation, which he thought was very good, and he also commented that this was a thoughtful author. Looking at the middle chapters, the Mortal Chapter felt cumbersome, but the author said that it has an idea. The author said that it is a plot to prepare the story for the unfolding of the following story. Although it is annoying to read, it should be a long chapter and there are many big moves that have not been used. Please be patient and wait, after all, I need to give this story an ending. I stayed up late to watch the middle and last part, feeling depressed, and then skipped to the ending (my true feeling). I was led by the author's chapter words (the author said these are all foreshadowing) and thought that there was still a lot of content that has not been developed. In fact, it doesn't matter if the writing is not good, after all, I still wrote so many words. This is my feeling as an ordinary reader who has loved novels for 20 years. As a reading consumer, I read books with my heart and respect the author, and I have such unpleasant feelings without any malice. In addition, good books are "afraid" of the author's eunuch, but they are worth waiting for. I hope that the author can reach the top in the future and this support will not be in vain.

Emmm... The ending... Always feels a bit rushed...

Finished reading. It's quite innovative, the writing is good, and it was quite refreshing to read it in one sitting. Although it's too idealistic, it's a novel, so it's good to have fun reading it. It feels very suitable for being made into a TV series.

I silently read the comments and wanted to slam the keyboard. Didn't you make the Demon Lord such a foodie, and would you tend to turn into a male protagonist? Shouldn't we reflect on it?

Skipping the part about the human world, the old devil is still quite cute.

Is the male protagonist Xuan Mou from the lower world...? Or is it Brother Fu...? In fact, it feels like it ended a little quickly in the end. The relationship is progressing at a rapid pace~ But I didn't finish one chapter~

(Spoiler alert) Wow, I finished reading it in one go. I didn't expect that it took me a long time to save it. Fortunately, my wife didn't give up. I was worried when I saw there weren't many comments. Wow, I knew I would have left more comments. My wife really likes this book! I always feel that my wife's novels have their own novelty in them. They are so interesting. So many characters this time, especially the male characters, are so cute! I guess the male lead is also very interesting. I even beat Xiaodai in the early stage. XD I really want Xiaoxia to have a harem, hahahaha. I watched it too eagerly and wanted to watch it again right away. It will definitely be more interesting to watch Mortal World after knowing that he is the old devil! Oh, I really want to get in the car! But it's already very sweet! I also like Xiaoxia when it comes to fried chicken! It's really emotional to see such a heroine grow up! Ah, I talked so much about qwq incoherently in the middle of the night. I apologize to my wife. I'm used to reading it after it's almost finished, so I just subscribe silently. I hope my wife doesn't dislike qwq's new articles. Please come on!

I've been reading it, and I really like the content. Then the male protagonist didn't appear until Chapter 90. He actually went to the mortal world. Just read the last two chapters.

I'll go and it'll be over by accident. It's great to be able to watch it after saving it for so long! I guess it's Tang Chihan

Zhao Yuankun? I feel like the way Dada gave him a very special appearance, he also accepted a spiritual pet for the heroine.