Rough-and-ready blurb:
As the daughter of the Ninth Generation's boss of the Vongola family, she hadn't even mastered her cheat powers yet.
Before Ershula could enjoy life, an accident sent her back to the era of Vongola Primo.
The only way back was to get close to Primo and obtain the Vongola Rings.
So this is what it means to barge into someone's world and then... take another lap around it?
Bystander A: "I'll bet ten cents the heroine definitely won't make it back!"
Bystander B: "Hey, hey, what happened to the serious story we were promised? Author, can you make it any funnier?"
Fine, I got sidetracked. This is the story of two people falling for each other, along with the First Generation family's struggles and achievements!
Serious blurb:
Time passed.
In the darkness that stretched on too long, even my name faded from memory.
Until I saw your radiance, until you called for me.
So I will defeat with my own hands anything that threatens you,
Until blood runs in a mighty river,
And only then will it all settle into dust.
Reader's guide: The old version has been completely rewritten. Please forgive the OOC characterization in the early drafts.
1. A paradoxical mess, occasionally researched in painstaking detail. Everything serves the plot.
2. There are many original characters, but the Simon family won't get a lot of page time. Primo and the Guardians appear at the height of their power. Other than D's canon pairing, the other Guardians won't get romantic pairings. Friendship comes first.
3. Both leads are each other's first.
4. The story has an upbeat tone. It's not a bad ending, it's not! I promise a happy ending!
5. For now, updates are on Saturdays. I'm working hard to build up a backlog. Thank you for your support!
Theme: At the end of the darkness, I see a light waiting for me
I really understand that many authors will create a bunch of personalities for their characters and then refine the scenes and shots in their minds bit by bit, and then when writing, there will be long descriptions such as portraits and clothes. They want to use this method to convey their inner scenes and video clips to the readers.
But, really, many times such a detailed description, or introduction, is not as good as a metaphor
The characters should be as detailed and three-dimensional as possible, from childhood experiences to clothing preferences, so that the characters can be vivid. However, there is a sad fact that a large part of the characters cannot be shown to the audience.
The appeal of novels often relies on synesthesia. If we can use words to present images, sounds, tastes and touches more concisely and efficiently, this is something that will take a lifetime to explore.
Let's encourage each other!
No, no more? I was a little caught off guard, and it's so well written! Looking forward to the follow-up
There's something wrong with the time. In the first chapter, the Avenger baby said it was 1847, but in this chapter it's 1835. A few paragraphs later, it says it's been several years since the heroine came here. Why is time still going backwards?
Sisters, it's finally updated
Only now did I notice that Laurentson in the supporting role is the love rival who is about to show up?
Could his love rival be Gavin? Although this is not his first appearance.
Probably except for Giotto, everyone else had no difficulty being photographed (hey).
These two people haven't had any ambiguity yet, but their love rival is about to show up.
I don't think Ershula is very bitter yet. I don't know if it's because most of the time the plot is narrated and her inner struggles are not mentioned much. Maybe I will feel bitter after seeing the extra story about how she becomes a killer.
Afraid of affecting the good relationship between Er Shula and Peng Gelie, so if the Avengers scenes are reduced, then what is the purpose of setting her up to have a relationship with them? I can't imagine how much effort they can put into (or are willing to put in) to obtain the Vongol Ring. Or, how much of her ability to settle down in this era is because of their help?
I always feel that the two people have so little interaction at the moment that it seems that progress is very slow. How many words does the author expect to finish?
It's okay if it's super slow, the important thing is not to get into trouble
Bury it and blow up the author!
I really understand that many authors will create a bunch of personalities for their characters and then refine the scenes and shots in their minds bit by bit, and then when writing, there will be long descriptions such as portraits and clothes. They want to use this method to convey their inner scenes and video clips to the readers. But, really, many times such a detailed description, or introduction, is not as good as a metaphor The characters should be as detailed and three-dimensional as possible, from childhood experiences to clothing preferences, so that the characters can be vivid. However, there is a sad fact that a large part of the characters cannot be shown to the audience. The appeal of novels often relies on synesthesia. If we can use words to present images, sounds, tastes and touches more concisely and efficiently, this is something that will take a lifetime to explore. Let's encourage each other!
No, no more? I was a little caught off guard, and it's so well written! Looking forward to the follow-up
There's something wrong with the time. In the first chapter, the Avenger baby said it was 1847, but in this chapter it's 1835. A few paragraphs later, it says it's been several years since the heroine came here. Why is time still going backwards?
Sisters, it's finally updated
Only now did I notice that Laurentson in the supporting role is the love rival who is about to show up?
Could his love rival be Gavin? Although this is not his first appearance. Probably except for Giotto, everyone else had no difficulty being photographed (hey).
These two people haven't had any ambiguity yet, but their love rival is about to show up. I don't think Ershula is very bitter yet. I don't know if it's because most of the time the plot is narrated and her inner struggles are not mentioned much. Maybe I will feel bitter after seeing the extra story about how she becomes a killer. Afraid of affecting the good relationship between Er Shula and Peng Gelie, so if the Avengers scenes are reduced, then what is the purpose of setting her up to have a relationship with them? I can't imagine how much effort they can put into (or are willing to put in) to obtain the Vongol Ring. Or, how much of her ability to settle down in this era is because of their help?
I always feel that the two people have so little interaction at the moment that it seems that progress is very slow. How many words does the author expect to finish?
It's okay if it's super slow, the important thing is not to get into trouble