The End of the Night Frost

I always feel like Shen Yuanjin is deliberately irritating the heroine.

Shen Yuanjin is so bad, he looks like a rogue at first glance

Some people are like crows, good things don't work and bad things don't work.

These children are so pitiful

Genetic warriors, no pain or death?

Oh my god, it's so cruel and terrifying to create a drug for the living dead.

Pfft... The heroine is so domineering! Not bad, I like it~

The atmosphere is so tense! ! I'll keep watching! !

Until she saw the red and green potted plants placed under the railing of the balcony outside the house and the silver-white grand piano in the outhouse... This sentence is too long, you can add a few more commas! ~

The writing is good, but the layout is a bit dense and makes me tired to read. I recommend leaving each line blank.