LVSS: Reborn with the Key to the Heart

Severus hates Muggles. Even if Tom loved him, he would not be so in-depth into the Muggle world. The articles are short, OOC, sometimes embarrassing, and there are too many Muggle plots, but I don't think wizards will be so accepting. My personal experience is that there are too few magic elements, all are Muggles, the characters are seriously OOC, the "!" From time to time is embarrassing, and the plot is a bit nonsense... What I am most opposed to this article is the Muggle plot and plot. If it is just an ordinary Hogwarts school and occasionally let people see the sweet exclamation of lvss, the plain one is better, and it can also unlock the other person's heart and guard in the process. The article is really incompetent, childish and out of touch with reality. The above may be a bit extreme, everyone has their own ideas, and each carrot and cabbage has its own love. Please don't be a brainless saint to criticize me. Thanks

Hmm If we talk about people who have been reborn once, Severus's performance is indeed a bit... Immature. But it's still passable I always feel that according to Severus' personality, this matter shouldn't have developed like this.

T^TThe consequence of a chapter that is too short is that even if it is sprinkled with sugar, it will not be sweet enough.

Severus' psychological change process was too rapid But in the future we can show affection

Looking at lvss, I wonder what to do with lmss?

Since I regarded Sif as a time traveler and gained the memory of the original owner, and regarded Salazar as a widowed system that issues tasks and only cares about tasks and rewards, everything made sense.

Um. . . Snape was 7 years old and entered Hogwarts at the age of 11. He was in the same school as Malfoy. The old Malfoy's trip was a bit long.

Agree with the above, don't you give up bread for love?

Although the disease that caused Abu's death has the word "dragon" in it, it was syphilis...

Well, I finally finished reading it... This is the first article I wanted to write about in JJ The first is that each chapter is too short + V/S develops incredibly fast, so I don't know why it lost a lot of readers... But in the middle, the plot gradually became richer and more solid, and in the later stages it developed into a plot that was not only about the British wizarding world but also really GJ! If the author had the ability/strength to expand and develop the original plot and add some content, it would really be a great story!