Katekyo Hitman Reborn: The Gentle Flower

Ouch, Ouch, come on!

Come on, it looks great! Never give up writing

Great writing, please keep updating (°Д°) Ъ Like it!

Applause ???10 Points

It's not easy to come back, even though this is a little bit

The author wrote about Skylark so badly. There may be no distinction between men and women in Skylark's eyes. Skylark is even less likely to say so many words. Unless the opponent is someone with a strong force value that makes him want to fight, maybe it is possible. I hope you can grasp the character traits of Skylark, etc. It is not the person who shouts about swarming, biting, and herbivorous animals, it is Skylark. I hope the author can grasp the description of Skylark's people well.

Still stuck at the critical moment!!!

Well, in fact, for Skylark, too much psychological activity will lose his own charm. We must firmly grasp his main image - aloofness (Zhong Er and other things have already been deeply rooted in the hearts of the people), otherwise, the character will easily collapse. You can add more details and add some environment appropriately. These are just some small suggestions (~o￣▽￣)~o I still look forward to the development of the plot, which will be a hard work for the author*(^_^)/*

... This is romance (for men and women)... Not pure love (for men and women). Could you please change the category tag...

... This is romance (for men and women)... Not pure love (for men and women). Could you please change the category tag...