[Chinese Paladin 5] Fate Returns (Youman)

"Although Long You won't let me say this, Xiaoman, Yasha's condition isn't looking good."

"Sigh... You really do worry me, child. Promise your master you won't push yourself, all right?"

"You stinking Long You! In thirteen days, Xiao Jiang and I will be at the Rift Between Gods and Demons. Come if you want, or don't!"

"...Xiaoman!? ...Didn't you promise me you wouldn't go?"

"I'm still not strong enough. I only have one day, but someday I definitely will..."

"...A You, it's me."

"This jade is said to have belonged to the Goddess of the Luo River herself. Even divine artifacts are only slightly more powerful than it."

"By the time we found a way to prolong her life, her spirit had already departed... Things have come to this because of the cause and effect set in motion long ago."

"...I accept your promise, and I will not let you down."

"Where you are is home."

Pairings: You-Man, Yun-Yu, Ming-Bo

Game fanfiction, one-on-one romance, happy ending. Other pairings undecided.

Revised version! I've started a new draft, and deleted the original!

This is already the fourth major revision. I hope there won't be a fifth time, OTZ