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----Synopsis----
Cloud-Locked Chapter
Amid the chaos of a troubled age, life and death hang by a thread. But who, in the end, can escape fate's entanglements?
She is his tribulation. She betrays the city and welcomes the enemy; in the isolated city, she drives him to the brink of death. Moonlight shimmers on a silver hairpin, incense characters burn to ash in the burner, and the Autumn Waters Sword rises, cutting away all tenderness. The hatred in her eyes seems capable of corroding his very bones, yet it cannot sever the karmic ties of this world. Deception, fire, and the chaos of war: in the end, she is sent back to his side once more. Darkness deepens at dusk, and blood blooms like a lotus, yet sorrow flows in her eyes like water. Blood debts are easy to repay, but how can one so easily settle a debt of the heart?
She once believed she was merely a pawn at his side, her touch cold as the armor he wore. But fate takes a strange turn: he and she were once acquainted. Now the iron-blooded general is no longer the carefree young man of Chang'an. With so many ambitions for the realm and so many sorrows for its heroes, the tangled threads of love and hate become a mighty river barring their way.
The war rages on, and the victor rules. Where will they go from here?
Red Mansion Chapter
Fate forms a ring, unmoved by the turning years.
Once more, strange events arise in Jinling. Storm clouds gather over the court. He wants to leave, while she wants him to stay. Who can escape this prison fate has ordained? One conspiracy follows another, like links in a chain, and no one knows where to begin unraveling them. He is forced into marrying a princess, while she falls even further into the mire.
His eyes are as calm as autumn waters. He watches the court, and he watches her. Everything seems to be in the palm of his hand, yet everything is full of surprises. A palace coup, a struggle for power, a dispute: all of it is merely a fight to reclaim what is rightfully his. Beyond the eighty-four-ribbed parasol, misty rain veils the world. On the banks of the Qinhuai in Jiangnan, the trap he lays for her ensnares someone else as well...
Who is he, and who is he?
A web of power-woven intrigue winds like a mystery above Jinling. Beyond the layers of vermilion courtyards, the setting sun weeps blood. In this contest of love and hate, who will ultimately find redemption?
Cover artist, upper left: Xun Yeyu
Theme:
So Yan Suihan died.
So Xiao Wei ascended the throne and created a dynasty.
So Qi Xuan chose to leave and hide from the world from then on.
It is in response to the prophecy that when the wine is drunk, the love is desolate, and the bottle is still in a state of confusion.
Judging from the content of the article, the ups and downs of the plot are handled very well. The article begins with the tranquility before the war, and then the turning point of the war, and the recognition of Qi Xuan and Xiao Wei, thus adding a new variable factor to the simple rivalry between Yan Suihan and Xiao Wei (women, everything is because of women = =!!). What follows is Qi Xuan's past, the intersection of those past events and the present, and the struggles and confusions of countless people. Time is the main thread of everything. As the war subsided, the internal conflicts of the Chen Dynasty intertwined with the final counterattack of Yan Suihan's troops. When the dust settled, a new dynasty was established on the foundation of the previous dynasty. There is nothing left but remembrance. The story is quite complicated, and it is not easy to write so many things clearly and tightly in a short number of words. I secretly thought that Chenxiangyuan was very well written about the night when Huaicheng fell. The dialogue between Xiaoyan and Qi Xuan, looking at each other, until Qiu Shui came out of the sheath later, Qi Xuan's past was just mentioned in one stroke, very simple and clear. Then A Xuan's escape and the description of the surrounding environment can really bring out the panic in a person's heart. Then came the official meeting between Xiao Wei and Qi Xuan, and Yan Suihan's disappearance not only began to arouse suspicion between the two, but also left a suspense for the subsequent advancement of the story. So I always think that this kind of opening is very grand and powerful. Much love.
Judging from the structure of the article, it is actually not too complicated. If it is deleted severely, there will only be one main line of Xiao Wei. As for Qi Xuan, Yan Suihan, Xu Tianran, Nangong, and later the Queen Mother, Song Cheng, (and Xiao Wei's brother, I wonder if this role was deleted in the end?) Are just side characters. This clue becomes more obvious the further it goes on. Looking back at the previous articles, there seems to be no obvious foreshadowing, which is probably a pity. The grasp of rhythm should be the second most important thing in an article after the content of the article. Only when the narrative is detailed and soothing can it arouse the emotions of readers. Comparing the upper and lower parts of the article, the Zhulou chapter at the back is better than the Yunsuo chapter at the front. On the one hand, it is because the temple dispute in the latter part gradually becomes more complicated, and Yan Suihan's first part is insinuating, and the suspense begins to deepen. On the other hand, the use of writing becomes more crisp and clear, and there are not too many irrelevant descriptions of the plot to distract the train of thought.
As for the writing style, it should be the last one. Whether it's gorgeous or simple, it's just a reflection of the author's personal style and has nothing to do with anyone else. The writing style is just for the story, and it can be used freely as long as it can explain the content. Just don't overdo it. Xiao Mulan's writing style is very straightforward, so it can't be discussed.
The extra chapter was very loving, and suddenly I thought that Xiao Wei was still lonely. Winning the country is actually the most unpaid reward. Sometimes when you fight for something, you feel depressed when you can't get it. When you get it, you are afraid that others will take it away again, so you have to be cautious all day long, walking on thin ice, and you will not rest until death, or you will not have peace until death. After all, there are too many things to think about, so people will be very tired. So it's best not to be such a person, and don't expect such a person. As long as a person is alive, it is best to feel comfortable.
But, who will accompany me through all the tribulations, after life and death, gently hold my hand, smile innocently, and spend this life together?
I finally finished writing this damn series of reviews, and then a certain Song struggled weakly and digressed.
No matter what type of novel it is, if it is written by a certain Song Dynasty, it will usually leave a good ending. The romance is the same, the reasoning is the same, and I guess the same will be true for future novels. I remember telling Mulan that I wrote this way because there are too many unsatisfactory things in this world, so if I can, I will try my best to make up a myth. At least in my story, the protagonist can still live happily. The result seems to be contempt, and serious contempt. Of course, I know that such an idea is really stupid, but it is difficult to get around this vicious circle. If I had to choose, in the end, it would be better to be in the court than to be far away from the world.
After all, if I have to throw away too many things, I won't be able to part with them.
General Manager of Yue Family
Executive Chairman of the Central Committee of the Yan Party
Executive Secretary of Yan Party Logistics Committee
Deputy Captain of Yan Suihan's Guards
Vice President of Yan Party Research Association
Model steward of the Yanhuang royal family
Song Keer
February 6, 2009 in Fuzhou Prefecture, Jiangnan East Road
Suddenly I realized that only three of my four comments had been posted! Make up, make up~ I looked at the time and it was already eight years ago... Ah youth...
Damn, can I say that it's too misleading? After watching it all in one night, it's so overwhelming! It's right to write about coups and military exercises from an individual perspective, the writing is good, and the details are well described. However, the big skeleton of the story is not supported, and Han Yanqing's character also falls into a cliche.
Seeing how excited I was in the first half, I thought I had found a great one, but I couldn't hold it back. I think it has something to do with your own living conditions and changes in your mind.
Looking forward to the new work!
After reading everyone's comments, it turns out that Xiaoyan got what she wanted.
If Xiao Wei is the male protagonist, this male protagonist is not good. This is the first time I have read a novel and liked the male protagonist.
I feel it's not worth it for Xiaoyan
This stone is truly disgusting
Don't blame me for being stupid, I still haven't seen the ending of the three of them. I only know that Xiao became emperor and Qi left. Is Yan dead?
Hey, you are deliberately trying to put gold on Xiao Xiao's face, huh.
In the end, it was written that he looked so innocent. If he was innocent, would my Yanzi still deserve to die?
Hey, I realized that I am really looking for abuse. If I have nothing to do, I will go to your article to stimulate myself.
Hey, every time I see the last sentence here, he will never come after me and becomes sad again.
I said that A-Xuan took her feelings for Xiao Wei too seriously, so things turned out not to be as she originally imagined in the end, and she collapsed.
Therefore, sometimes it is not a good thing to fall in love with someone who cares about the world but doesn't have himself.
Torture it, continue to abuse it. Snort.
Although the author has put up the ending, I have no money left. What a pity, when there is money, there is no ending. Now that there is an ending, I have no money left. I used to like this article very much, but now because it has been so long, I have almost forgotten the plot of the story. Poor Qi Xuan, poor Yan Suihan.
So Yan Suihan died. So Xiao Wei ascended the throne and created a dynasty. So Qi Xuan chose to leave and hide from the world from then on. It is in response to the prophecy that when the wine is drunk, the love is desolate, and the bottle is still in a state of confusion. Judging from the content of the article, the ups and downs of the plot are handled very well. The article begins with the tranquility before the war, and then the turning point of the war, and the recognition of Qi Xuan and Xiao Wei, thus adding a new variable factor to the simple rivalry between Yan Suihan and Xiao Wei (women, everything is because of women = =!!). What follows is Qi Xuan's past, the intersection of those past events and the present, and the struggles and confusions of countless people. Time is the main thread of everything. As the war subsided, the internal conflicts of the Chen Dynasty intertwined with the final counterattack of Yan Suihan's troops. When the dust settled, a new dynasty was established on the foundation of the previous dynasty. There is nothing left but remembrance. The story is quite complicated, and it is not easy to write so many things clearly and tightly in a short number of words. I secretly thought that Chenxiangyuan was very well written about the night when Huaicheng fell. The dialogue between Xiaoyan and Qi Xuan, looking at each other, until Qiu Shui came out of the sheath later, Qi Xuan's past was just mentioned in one stroke, very simple and clear. Then A Xuan's escape and the description of the surrounding environment can really bring out the panic in a person's heart. Then came the official meeting between Xiao Wei and Qi Xuan, and Yan Suihan's disappearance not only began to arouse suspicion between the two, but also left a suspense for the subsequent advancement of the story. So I always think that this kind of opening is very grand and powerful. Much love. Judging from the structure of the article, it is actually not too complicated. If it is deleted severely, there will only be one main line of Xiao Wei. As for Qi Xuan, Yan Suihan, Xu Tianran, Nangong, and later the Queen Mother, Song Cheng, (and Xiao Wei's brother, I wonder if this role was deleted in the end?) Are just side characters. This clue becomes more obvious the further it goes on. Looking back at the previous articles, there seems to be no obvious foreshadowing, which is probably a pity. The grasp of rhythm should be the second most important thing in an article after the content of the article. Only when the narrative is detailed and soothing can it arouse the emotions of readers. Comparing the upper and lower parts of the article, the Zhulou chapter at the back is better than the Yunsuo chapter at the front. On the one hand, it is because the temple dispute in the latter part gradually becomes more complicated, and Yan Suihan's first part is insinuating, and the suspense begins to deepen. On the other hand, the use of writing becomes more crisp and clear, and there are not too many irrelevant descriptions of the plot to distract the train of thought. As for the writing style, it should be the last one. Whether it's gorgeous or simple, it's just a reflection of the author's personal style and has nothing to do with anyone else. The writing style is just for the story, and it can be used freely as long as it can explain the content. Just don't overdo it. Xiao Mulan's writing style is very straightforward, so it can't be discussed. The extra chapter was very loving, and suddenly I thought that Xiao Wei was still lonely. Winning the country is actually the most unpaid reward. Sometimes when you fight for something, you feel depressed when you can't get it. When you get it, you are afraid that others will take it away again, so you have to be cautious all day long, walking on thin ice, and you will not rest until death, or you will not have peace until death. After all, there are too many things to think about, so people will be very tired. So it's best not to be such a person, and don't expect such a person. As long as a person is alive, it is best to feel comfortable. But, who will accompany me through all the tribulations, after life and death, gently hold my hand, smile innocently, and spend this life together? I finally finished writing this damn series of reviews, and then a certain Song struggled weakly and digressed. No matter what type of novel it is, if it is written by a certain Song Dynasty, it will usually leave a good ending. The romance is the same, the reasoning is the same, and I guess the same will be true for future novels. I remember telling Mulan that I wrote this way because there are too many unsatisfactory things in this world, so if I can, I will try my best to make up a myth. At least in my story, the protagonist can still live happily. The result seems to be contempt, and serious contempt. Of course, I know that such an idea is really stupid, but it is difficult to get around this vicious circle. If I had to choose, in the end, it would be better to be in the court than to be far away from the world. After all, if I have to throw away too many things, I won't be able to part with them. General Manager of Yue Family Executive Chairman of the Central Committee of the Yan Party Executive Secretary of Yan Party Logistics Committee Deputy Captain of Yan Suihan's Guards Vice President of Yan Party Research Association Model steward of the Yanhuang royal family Song Keer February 6, 2009 in Fuzhou Prefecture, Jiangnan East Road Suddenly I realized that only three of my four comments had been posted! Make up, make up~ I looked at the time and it was already eight years ago... Ah youth...
Damn, can I say that it's too misleading? After watching it all in one night, it's so overwhelming! It's right to write about coups and military exercises from an individual perspective, the writing is good, and the details are well described. However, the big skeleton of the story is not supported, and Han Yanqing's character also falls into a cliche. Seeing how excited I was in the first half, I thought I had found a great one, but I couldn't hold it back. I think it has something to do with your own living conditions and changes in your mind. Looking forward to the new work!
After reading everyone's comments, it turns out that Xiaoyan got what she wanted.
If Xiao Wei is the male protagonist, this male protagonist is not good. This is the first time I have read a novel and liked the male protagonist.
I feel it's not worth it for Xiaoyan
This stone is truly disgusting
Don't blame me for being stupid, I still haven't seen the ending of the three of them. I only know that Xiao became emperor and Qi left. Is Yan dead?
Hey, you are deliberately trying to put gold on Xiao Xiao's face, huh. In the end, it was written that he looked so innocent. If he was innocent, would my Yanzi still deserve to die? Hey, I realized that I am really looking for abuse. If I have nothing to do, I will go to your article to stimulate myself.
Hey, every time I see the last sentence here, he will never come after me and becomes sad again. I said that A-Xuan took her feelings for Xiao Wei too seriously, so things turned out not to be as she originally imagined in the end, and she collapsed. Therefore, sometimes it is not a good thing to fall in love with someone who cares about the world but doesn't have himself. Torture it, continue to abuse it. Snort.
Although the author has put up the ending, I have no money left. What a pity, when there is money, there is no ending. Now that there is an ending, I have no money left. I used to like this article very much, but now because it has been so long, I have almost forgotten the plot of the story. Poor Qi Xuan, poor Yan Suihan.