Cultivation: Spraying You with Immortal Dew

I am satisfied, I am on the right cp

I haven't read such an interesting fairy tale in a long time. The heroine came up step by step completely on her own. Except for the low IQ of the supporting characters, the logic of this article is still good. I like this very much. But really, why wasn't the ending written a little slower? Including the legend, it felt like there was no obvious foreshadowing (or did I not notice it before?), And then suddenly a passage was opened, I followed the creek to find the monster and then left... It's not that it's bad, I just felt that it was a bit of a waste of the wonderful foreshadowing and stories in the past, and the ending was too abrupt. If you want a novel to be well written, it's best to start well and end well. You need to pay more attention to it so that you don't leave any regrets! There is also the issue of the character and emotion of the male partner. It feels like the author wanted to arrange more emotional lines but then suddenly chose Ling Yi. It seems to me that both Xu Lang and Qin Demon somewhat like the heroine, so I won't go back and look for the details. Then suddenly Xu Lang no longer cared about the heroine's safety (he was still worried about the heroine after the first separation, but later he saw the heroine not worried at all on the way to Ligong Island, just watching). Also, when the crowd was attacking the heroine, Devil Qin still wanted to fight in the end to defend the heroine. Although the heroine later wisely saved the situation, he said that Devil Qin still had some revolutionary feelings for the heroine no matter what, otherwise he could have betrayed the heroine at that time and he would have been fine. Later, when the heroine came to the demon world, she suddenly became very cold... Especially when the heroine fought against Demon Qin, I didn't quite understand it... Although the heroine has always been crazy, why does she feel a little bit crazy when she is so crazy? Orz... Also, the male protagonist fell in love with the female protagonist a bit suddenly, and I always felt that there was a lack of a gradual process. In short, I really like the character and thoughtful thinking of the heroine of the story. She is indeed very intelligent and courageous. It is very enjoyable to watch. Compared with other fairy tales where the heroine is said to be strong but in fact it still depends on the male protagonist, it is so simple and unpretentious... But in terms of emotions, I feel that the author is a bit lacking in writing experience in this area? I also hope you can be more patient with the ending! I hope the author can make more progress in the future! Looking forward to future works_(:зゝ∠)_!

It's a very interesting story, with humor and a smooth plot. The heroine is very strong and very lucky. It's a pity that none of the three excellent male supporting characters can catch the eye of the heroine. Sure enough, as long as women are strong enough, men will step aside.

This ending is too perfunctory, it's better not to write it! It's you who starts before the tail ends!

Downstairs, what's the pity, it's just an object.

Downstairs, why did you come to the capital to praise the man? There is no need for a woman to be strong enough. No matter how bad a woman is, she can do good things and be a good person, as long as she has dignity, she should let the man stand aside.

I do feel like it ended relatively quickly.

Ouch~ Why not? ! ! ! ! ! The male and female protagonists don't even drive a car at all!

Nice! Interesting and cool article

Hurry up and update the new article. Why don't you make money to eat? ? ? ? You don't want to make money, I want to spend money???