Douluo Dalu: Snow City, River Moon
斗罗大陆之雪城江月
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斗罗大陆之雪城江月
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Isn't it written from the heroine's perspective? Why does the heroine have a sense of presence in the first 20 chapters? Can't find it
Have! There is a novel where the protagonist is born with level 99 and has 100 martial arts spirits. I forgot what novel it is.
Seeing this, the heroine's sense of presence is too low. This is completely the original text.
Author, the writing is good, but the amount of pasting and copying you used is limited to the deep pit of the original text. When I read the introduction of the heroine, I thought the heroine was too sexy. But after reading the article, I found that most of the heroines are worse than walk-ins. A small part, haha, author, I hope you can read your article as a reader, and I hope it will be overhauled!
??? Didn't it mean that the heroine is one year younger than Tang San? But without Ah Yin, how was the heroine born? The heroine and Tang San are biological children!
"Wedding" is a big thorn in the side of the author~ Isn't it soul power?
? Can you be smart when writing? The highest level of innate talent is 10. Do you want to go to heaven if you reach level 20?
Sisters, don't you have to have an IQ to write fan fiction?
No, even though this article was written several years ago, I still want to say it. What the hell is a billion-year-old soul beast? There are not many million-year-old soul beasts in total. You can make me a billion-year-old soul beast. Are you kidding me? And what about that mark? It should be the male protagonist. He is 13 years old and level 88. Are you kidding me? It also has an omnipotent system. Does the original work have this system? Please! Write something that is consistent with the common sense of the original work.
I'm surprised. Shrek Academy graduated directly at level 40, right? Are you going to school at level 58? This is too Mary Sue, and six martial arts spirits are not afraid of exploding. Besides, at 11 years old and level 58, this is not a genius. This is not suitable for the city of Douluo Continent. You only awaken the martial arts spirit at the age of six. You need to get a spirit ring this year. You are the god of Mary Sue.