"He said that in our next life, he would come and marry me, just as he did back then."
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Warnings:
1. This story has a bad ending.
2. I have two exams in December, so I'll be pretty busy.
3. About 500 characters per hour, and not updated daily.
Author Piao You's completed work: [Naruto] I'll Go Home and Get Married After Taking Down This Boss
The author's reader group: 279317320
Come on in and tease me!
Theme:
As soon as I started reading the copy, I felt something was wrong. The author, you big liar, is not sweet at all. (*??????)
So Kong was reincarnated as Sarana [Indifference. Jpg]
Sasuke is actually just the reincarnation of Indra's chakra, and his actual soul is not him. Otherwise, Madara and Sasuke would not be in the same time and space at the same time, and neither would Judy and the prince. Indra's soul should have been extinguished after his death. Those who were reincarnated by the filthy land were only those who stayed in the pure land without any knots in their hearts. People like Judy and Madara who were reincarnated in the filthy land untied their knots and dissipated. White Fang's conversation with Kakashi when Pain was conquering Konoha, he may have had a knot in his heart that he didn't understand to stay in the Pure Land, and it dissipated after talking to his son. Referring to the fourth battle, his fighting power was also good, but he was not reincarnated by the Dirty Land.
Although the writing of this novel makes people feel secretly heartwarming, there are problems with some details. After all, this is fan fiction, and the original work must be examined. What Kuro said about Sasuke's marriage is illogical, because Naruto and Sasuke are the same age, but they are just good friends with Naruto. There is no need to emphasize this point and say that the author is a brat... Besides, the daily state of the three sand waterfall siblings is not like that, right? Besides, someone is not the kind of person who is cheerful enough to tell ghost stories in broad daylight, and Temari is not someone who beats her brother away in a circle. The shortcoming of Gaara is his reaction to the heroine. It is really amazing that a dignified Kazekage would be embarrassed because of the salute of an unknown woman. And wouldn't it be possible for three very powerful characters to team up with a heroine of unknown origin? There is also the scene where the heroine is tortured by the villagers of Konoha. I want to say that people in Konoha are not like that, right? Of course, if the author intended this, I will pretend that I didn't say it. (After all, I quite like this novel~)
Well, in general, the writing is good, but the plot is second-rate (there are too many plots of obsessed men and women), and there are certain problems in logic. So in order not to waste your good writing skills, you should practice more in these two aspects.
Finally, I am also looking forward to the author⊙?⊙!
Ah..._(:з∠)_Why have I been abused in everything I watch recently? Oh, oh, oh, oh, and the writing style of Belt is so cruel. Wocccc But really, Belt, your writing is sincere and amazing... [Please accept my knee]
Not sweet at all! ! ! ! Indra is such a bastard! We agreed to reincarnate together! ! !
KYA~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Indra sama! ! ! ! The heroine feels so soft, she's my type
Not sweet at all T^T
No sofa to sit on
This world... Is so good (*≧▽≦)
Sofa! ! ! !
By the way, a hairstyle like Indra would definitely be criticized in modern times, right? ! ?
As soon as I started reading the copy, I felt something was wrong. The author, you big liar, is not sweet at all. (*??????)
So Kong was reincarnated as Sarana [Indifference. Jpg]
Sasuke is actually just the reincarnation of Indra's chakra, and his actual soul is not him. Otherwise, Madara and Sasuke would not be in the same time and space at the same time, and neither would Judy and the prince. Indra's soul should have been extinguished after his death. Those who were reincarnated by the filthy land were only those who stayed in the pure land without any knots in their hearts. People like Judy and Madara who were reincarnated in the filthy land untied their knots and dissipated. White Fang's conversation with Kakashi when Pain was conquering Konoha, he may have had a knot in his heart that he didn't understand to stay in the Pure Land, and it dissipated after talking to his son. Referring to the fourth battle, his fighting power was also good, but he was not reincarnated by the Dirty Land.
Although the writing of this novel makes people feel secretly heartwarming, there are problems with some details. After all, this is fan fiction, and the original work must be examined. What Kuro said about Sasuke's marriage is illogical, because Naruto and Sasuke are the same age, but they are just good friends with Naruto. There is no need to emphasize this point and say that the author is a brat... Besides, the daily state of the three sand waterfall siblings is not like that, right? Besides, someone is not the kind of person who is cheerful enough to tell ghost stories in broad daylight, and Temari is not someone who beats her brother away in a circle. The shortcoming of Gaara is his reaction to the heroine. It is really amazing that a dignified Kazekage would be embarrassed because of the salute of an unknown woman. And wouldn't it be possible for three very powerful characters to team up with a heroine of unknown origin? There is also the scene where the heroine is tortured by the villagers of Konoha. I want to say that people in Konoha are not like that, right? Of course, if the author intended this, I will pretend that I didn't say it. (After all, I quite like this novel~) Well, in general, the writing is good, but the plot is second-rate (there are too many plots of obsessed men and women), and there are certain problems in logic. So in order not to waste your good writing skills, you should practice more in these two aspects. Finally, I am also looking forward to the author⊙?⊙!
Ah..._(:з∠)_Why have I been abused in everything I watch recently? Oh, oh, oh, oh, and the writing style of Belt is so cruel. Wocccc But really, Belt, your writing is sincere and amazing... [Please accept my knee]
Not sweet at all! ! ! ! Indra is such a bastard! We agreed to reincarnate together! ! !
KYA~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Indra sama! ! ! ! The heroine feels so soft, she's my type
Not sweet at all T^T
No sofa to sit on This world... Is so good (*≧▽≦)
Sofa! ! ! ! By the way, a hairstyle like Indra would definitely be criticized in modern times, right? ! ?