A freak car accident leaves siblings Xia Xiaolu and Xia Xiaoran somehow switching bodies.
The older sister says, “I’ll help you get into college, so you can help me win over the person I like.”
And so this bizarre story begins to play out in the real world.
Su Yi, you’re in love with me... but you don’t know that you’re in love with me.
You look through this body and see my soul, but when that soul merges with another body, will you still remember the feelings you once had?
Readers who have seen it say this story has no twists or drama, is squeaky-clean and angst-free, and has a touch of silliness and childish writing... There may also be the occasional shock.
I’m planning to delete and rewrite the ending (though I don’t know when I’ll write it).
Here’s a link to my new story (it’s not a paid novel).
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The ending made me want to cry. Su Yi is not brave enough, but the reality is that his lack of bravery is rational enough. If there is any praise for him, he fell in love with a soul, not a person. It's a pity that fate plays tricks on people. Life is really not about having enough love and water, there are a lot to face. So this ending is very realistic, but I also hate this ending.
... Six years later? I'm not sure what HE will look like ten years from now. Have you heard about D&G? Say forever means forever? No one can make the decision
Sorry, I forgot to rate it
I really like your rationality and admire your style. I really like the words in your column, 'Don't sensationalize, don't be cynical, keep a low profile'
Indeed, if you push the time back to work, you will feel much more at ease. . .
Occasionally, I forgot to select the score.
They say the styles are different, but you can feel the similar soul when you look at them I like things that are more relaxed and realistic, and now it seems that I have found it. So, come on
Yes, after both parties have matured and gained a certain amount of social experience and financial foundation, we can then look at each other's feelings. This may go a long way.
Finally finished reading. In fact, this type of writing is rare. Although I saw some people saying that the ending was rushed, I think it was the feeling that slowly settled. When you are young, such love may be frivolous. So, they didn't take that step. Later, they matured and had the power to choose their own lives. Everything will fall into place. Author's reply: I gave you points, but I don't know if it's useful? Hehe, I also think my ending is quite good.
After reading it, there is a black line, and that's it? It felt like someone had fried my favorite winter melon into my most hated radish flavor. Boss, has a very good structure, good characters, and a good plot, but the story is so thin until the end. You can actually write better