The Shangguan Clan's Fate-Changing Tale

Emmm. . The author's ancient style is quite good. In fact, this kind of plot should be faster. After reading this part, read the other stories.

Just one question, is the whole story free of abuse, and is it incredibly sweet?

It's great, spring is blooming, it's really a very beautiful and warm ending~

I'm still not finished! I always feel like it's a little less thrilling, but it's still good-looking, so please give it a try

Wow! Suddenly there are so many collections, keep at it! Come on

Brother Xiaoyao is great, my brother is awesome┏(`ー?)┛

It feels like reading a martial arts novel. The male protagonist seems to be the type to cheat o(^)o What am I talking about? Forgive me greatly…

Hello Yixiaoyao, I am Diao Min from Shicheng Studio. After reading all the published chapters of "Shangguan Family Changes Their Destiny", I came here to send a long review. I'm very sorry to have kept you waiting for too long due to Diao Min's work in the second dimension. I hope it's not too late. In fact, I only read half of it on the day I received the order. I told my friends at the time that I hadn't seen someone write about one thing wholeheartedly for a long time and sincerely sprinkle candy and give dog food. I personally quite like the setting of the male protagonist, who is gentle with a bit of strength and a dark underbelly, and has a kind of wilting and bad character. I have always liked this kind of male character with a gentle temperament (even if it is just an illusion). Although the heroine is a type with a relatively low presence in ancient dramas, she happens to be the type that I don't dislike. She is not pretentious and has strong fighting ability. Therefore, I am quite happy to watch these two people being together for nothing (but there is no meat, Fa is happy). On the premise that there are no major problems in the setting of the protagonist, the reason why the data of the author's article is so poor can only be due to the plot. Of course, this does not mean that there is anything wrong with the plot structure of the author. In addition to the fact that the author has suffered a little loss from JJ's current environment, and using JJ as a platform, novels in the format of "The Story of Shangguan's Change of Destiny" are really not able to attract readers' attention. I'm just making a hypothesis: If the author's article was based directly on the content in the introduction, the data would definitely be better than the current one. The author feels that this article is actually very easy to give people the feeling that they are watching someone else's love story, and it is not very engaging. Take the example of love in novels, which can make readers feel the same. Mostly because readers follow the characters in the novel and share the joys and sorrows. That is why they can scream and be beaten to death when the CP in the novel is giving out candy. When they are arguing, they are struggling and guessing when they can reconcile. The male and female protagonists in the author's article have already established their love at the beginning of the chapter, and the readers have not participated in their past together. It is sweet, but not very heartwarming. Even if the past is shown one after another later, it cannot make up for the lack of not participating together. Perhaps this is more accurate - it would make people feel that they got into the game halfway and didn't have time to make up for the previous content. But in fact, I like the author's writing style very much. He speaks with a serious flavor of ancient proverbs, and he does not forcefully control himself to rely on ancient styles. When we read some ancient novels, the author really pays great attention to the wording. Every sentence and every word is used to show that he is writing ancient novels, but usually readers will find it very obscure when reading. Although the author's article cannot be regarded as a very good representative of ancient Chinese proverbs, the grasp of the words is very natural and does not feel artificial at all. There are several paragraphs in the middle that make me feel like I am reading a picture novel. So far, the author's progress in this article is actually very dull (not dull). He describes some daily life very honestly and calmly. Even though there are some descriptions of some battles that don't make much trouble, it doesn't make people feel bright. For me personally, the only flaw of this rhythm is that it makes people have little expectations for the subsequent plot. I usually say to authors who have suffered from the JJ environment: sorry. But the author does not use this word in this article, because even if this article is placed on other platforms, the data may be similar. Although it is not bad, after all, a novel that leaves readers with little expectations is already a fatal flaw. Ps. It would be better if there was more meat. How many times... The atmosphere is obviously enough, but the light is turned off...

I'll just wait. Personally, I think the one with the surname Shangguan is more handsome judging from the name. . Isn't it just because of the male partner that you just named him casually?

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