May Tomorrow Be Beautiful

I feel like the writing is okay, and it has a very student atmosphere. It seems that the author is really a student (ahem). However, I always felt that the atmosphere among the girls watching the basketball game was not enough, and there were few details about Xiaoyu's shyness, which made the smile behind him seem very abrupt. However, the overall rhythm is still very cheerful, which should be what attracted me to Zizhi. Damn it!!!