The womanizing superstar Shen Luo accidentally gets caught up in a feud between wealthy families. Facing the aggressive Miss Wang, he decides that taking a step back will bring him more room to maneuver, and keeps retreating until he ends up in Liu Jinqing's arms... As for Liu Jinqing, he keeps waking from one nightmare only to find himself forced into the next. Struggling through his nightmares, he looks at Shen Luo clinging to him and refusing to leave, and helplessly presses a hand to his forehead. What the heck, this blurb is even less reliable than the last one! Top. Liu Jinqing is the top, top, top. Strong leads. The protagonist is a little too perfect. Infinite flow, first world.
(I posted this on Tieba before. It had over 80 chapters, but the post was deleted because it had been on hiatus too long =_= This is a writing exercise. The prose is inexperienced, and there's no outline. My imagination ran wild, the details could use work, and the elaborate schemes can be a bit of a brain-burner. Overall, though, the beginning and end line up fairly well, the story is engaging, and while the romance may be a little weak, the plot flows smoothly. I'm more or less satisfied with the characterization. The first world is now complete, and I've laid most of the groundwork for the second, though the plot hasn't started yet. For now, I'm only posting the first volume. If anyone likes it, I'll keep writing, and try to update daily... try.)
P.S. I've decided not to revise it. Time is a big problem. Ahem, and the embarrassment is just too much.
P.S. The second volume starts a new story. None of the characters from this world will appear apart from the protagonists, and the plot is completely unrelated.
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Author, Liu Shigong, why do you write about Shen? The main point of view is still the main focus. I am so confused. Why do I encounter articles with the wrong point of view again? Can I change the perspective and fall into deep thought?
I'm just curious if this is the main focus. Is there another author who mislabeled the perspective? I'm lost in thought.
Why can't I seem to comment?
I still feel something is wrong. There are many things that the author didn't write out.
I like this meme very much, but it seems different from what I thought.
You really didn't come to the newspaper office in a bad mood::>_<::
Also, I'm not very clear about Zijin's settings.
Does his immortality refer to the reincarnation of memories from life to life? If so, why is it dark? Is it simply driven by a person's loneliness?
Like it very much? Please keep up the good work! ! !
Like it very much! ! ! Hey, please update it.
I'm so sad! Why is no one leaving a message? Although I feel like I'm being thundered now, QAQ, do you really not want to talk to me?
Author, Liu Shigong, why do you write about Shen? The main point of view is still the main focus. I am so confused. Why do I encounter articles with the wrong point of view again? Can I change the perspective and fall into deep thought?
I'm just curious if this is the main focus. Is there another author who mislabeled the perspective? I'm lost in thought.
Why can't I seem to comment?
I still feel something is wrong. There are many things that the author didn't write out.
I like this meme very much, but it seems different from what I thought.
You really didn't come to the newspaper office in a bad mood::>_<:: Also, I'm not very clear about Zijin's settings. Does his immortality refer to the reincarnation of memories from life to life? If so, why is it dark? Is it simply driven by a person's loneliness?
Like it very much? Please keep up the good work! ! !
Like it very much! ! ! Hey, please update it.
I'm so sad! Why is no one leaving a message? Although I feel like I'm being thundered now, QAQ, do you really not want to talk to me?