[Synopsis]
Amid the rise and fall of the galaxy, in the end, he was merely one dim star;
After years of secret love, in the end, he was merely a tragic character.
Faced with his dreams, he chose to drift with the tide;
Faced with love, he chose to submit...
Yet even a dim star longs for warmth and light,
And even a tragic character begs to live.
So at last, after submitting for so long, he finally learned what to choose and what to give up.
But now that he has finally let go, will he be able to gain anything?
Follow the story of Submission.
Because of the dripping water, did the word "Fan" become the word "Feng"?
There is no room for complaint in this chapter. He also looked over smoothly. Come on, the writing is not the best, but I'm not sorry for your age. It's not like the shameless white novel about Three White White Lotus written by an elementary school student.
There is no room for complaint in this chapter. I also looked over smoothly.
Damn it!!! Attack the unclean!!!! Suggested introduction to demining ==
Except for the complaints I had at the beginning of the first chapter, the rest of it felt smooth. Not bad, not bad. Keep it up
[The man was singing in the center of the stage, and he was singing the half-bright, half-sad tunes of those years with a clear, unembellished voice. He and seven other boys were dancing together for this man. ① As mentioned later, Lu Chen is the CEO, not an artist. Why do you sing? This should be the president interviewing new people? So the CEO is sitting down to watch the newcomers perform, right? Did I understand it wrong or did you write less and introduce one paragraph less? [And the entertainment company he is currently in is called "Sink and Float". ①The name of the company doesn't feel too grand, so you can just say 'and the entertainment company he is currently in is called Shenfu.
[While he was sitting in the hall nervously looking at the application form that he had carefully filled out, a man appeared. ② At this time, the man was only twenty-six years old. The black suit could not hide his slender figure, and the wide sunglasses could not hide his resolute and handsome face. Although he could not see it, he still deeply remembered that the fineness and beauty of this man's facial features were actually more concentrated in ③ those eyes that were dark and light, bright and dark.] ①At the beginning of the article, I looked at the sentence "A man appeared" and wondered where the man appeared? What man? If it is the protagonist, you can write "The man appeared", which can emphasize that the man who appears is the key character in the article, not a passerby. ②'At this time, the man was only twenty-six years old'. The 'this time' in this sentence should only refer to this paragraph as a memory, so we should use 'at that time'. ③As mentioned in the previous sentence, he is wearing sunglasses. How can you see what eyes look like in the second sentence? And the depth, lightness, lightness and darkness easily remind me of the unevenness of the eye mask==
The story seems to be getting more and more interesting~~~ Looking forward to the next part
That's pretty good. Come on~~
The number of words is too few, the author should work hard to update it!