This is my first attempt at writing a long story, started one night on a whim. It has a minefield of potential triggers, a drawn-out plot, and rough writing, so please proceed with caution!
GL. If that's not your thing, enter at your own risk!
To all the friends who kept me company through my devilish training,
And to everyone who read my rather mediocre story,
I'm truly grateful!
Yours sincerely,
Ye
Highly recommend my new work: Ghost Bird
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[The Ancient-Era Collection of Chivalrous Lovers] The complete series has four volumes; two are finished.
Volume One: The Beginning
Volume Two: The Continuation
Theme:
Well, well, well, after reading this article again after four years, I can't help but be inspired by the heroic spirit and love in it!! Like, like, like!!! Really good writing!!
The author hasn't written for a long time, right?
It's rare to find a chivalrous article in GL. Although there are some minor flaws, the overall light and dark lines are reasonable. Nowadays, martial arts seems to have three slightly skewed trends. One is mainly intrigues, and the knights are reduced to supporting roles in palace battles; the other is a group of demons dancing wildly, with blood everywhere; the third is Mary Sue, where the protagonist shines brightly with the moon, and the assholes are vying to kneel and lick them. "He who serves the country and the people and is a great chivalrous person" cannot move people's hearts if it is separated from the feelings of compassion and compassion, no matter how beautiful the rhetoric is and how well-conceived it is. The opening section is really great. . . . Fortunately, I read a few chapters later, otherwise I would have missed Ye Jun's masterpiece. Looking forward to the follow-up part two.
The author is really good at editing, I admire you very much
Leng Nuan floated here again with this tangled mobile phone to give scores.
Phew, I finally finished reading it, and my eyes were almost blind, but it was worth it. There are so few good articles these days, so it's worth spending the money By the way, when will the third part come out?
I've finished reading it and am waiting for the third part!
What to do? They all just want the one and only!
What happened to Afterimage? It seems that Huo Zhifeng is not Huo Shushen's daughter. There is a bit of a contradiction between Qingxinya and Duanchangya~~ It is obvious that Huo Shushen has never touched Chu Lian, so how can he have a biological child? Who did Chu Lian really love back then? A bit contradictory. Author's reply: This is a mystery - it will be solved in the third part~
Very well written, I read it in one sitting, great!